|Reviews for The Snare of Darkness|
| nathentheprotector chapter 11 . 3/12
I have a guess but really if Spyro chooses to be good just let him.
| coincidencless chapter 20 . 3/12
Oh boy. This is going to be good.
Good Guy Nexus. Can't breathe strong fire? Teaches you how.
Also, Flash is confirmed to be super-anti-wraith dragon.
Eagerly awaiting more, like always!
| nathentheprotector chapter 5 . 3/12
Hmmmm. Wait a second. If Voltera works well with Spyro then to me it means something way different then Cynder's thinking. Well I'm going to wait and see if I'm right.
| nathentheprotector chapter 2 . 3/11
Well thanks for writing a good story. That's the reason I'm reading this.
| Negative Infraction chapter 20 . 3/11
Ah, mind-linking. Ever an interesting feature. The way you've described it reminds me quite a bit about mental probing in the Inheritance Cycle, if you will. I've always been wondering how the protagonists would handle Ragnor's obvious mental advantage, and it seems I'm not disappointed by these developments. I still kind of want to slap Flash though. Speaking of Flash, my critique on this chapter lies with his sudden importance - it seems rather off-hand and impromptu, regardless of the sound logic behind it. You'd think the delivery of something that makes Flash the most "important dragon int he city" would have had a bigger impact.
Beyond that I'm worried about the situation in the city, with possible riots in response to Nexus' presence. Looking forward to seeing how Spyro handles public relations in the future, especially with the future hanging on his every move. He's in an awfully precarious position here.
Can't wait for the next one, as usual.
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/10
Neat chapter, so nexus helped faren out of pity he says but rather an act of caring even if he didnt realized it. Linking with spyro was a great way show us nexu's insight and to creat a backflip on your 2 main characters thoughts towards nexus. Terrador seems to carry the so dreaded news hu?
Yet again you kept me to the edge of my seat with your smooth and highly detailed thoughts and feelings that your characters depict.
Ps. ( got to love nexu's shapeshift picture on your deviant)
| SerBlack chapter 20 . 3/10
Aaagh, does Nexus have to physically make an effort to act like such a douche, or does it just come naturally to him? xD I appreciate that his teaching method had an effect on Faren, but I'd genuinely love to know if his demeanour is actually like that or if he's putting on this face in order to cover up the fact he's making an effort to be nice. Like, I love how you're pacing his character arc, but he's such a jerk. xD
Civil unrest and new almost-telepathic powers too I certainly agree that having Cyril on public relations may not have been the finest of decisions. The idea behind their mental connection is very interesting though, as is this continuing reference to them being brothers. It's bothering Spyro almost as much as it is me. xD Breaking the connection before Ragnor finds out though? I don't know if I want to see that.
Speaking of villains, is it me or have we not met our newest purple dragon for a while now? :P I hope she makes a reappearance soon.
| Tempest of Reach chapter 20 . 3/10
I like how Nexus is developing. He's a good teacher. Fierce and harsh... but he's good at his teaching.
| Feanor the Dragon chapter 20 . 3/10
Hmmm... Does Nexus have a heart now? A touch of sympathy for someone as scared outwardly as he is inwardly?
(or maybe he just has a crush on Faren XD)
As always, totally worth the wait. Nexus is as delicate and tactful as a sledge-hammer duck-taped to a running chainsaw, as he usually is, and things are starting to heat up a bit.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
The Dweller in Sane,
| guest chapter 20 . 3/10
Great chapter loved it, nexus seems to like helping faren wonder if it will be a case of opposites attract can't help wondering where this will go next chapter and beyond.
| Matthais Unidostres chapter 20 . 3/9
Well, Nexus seems to be a good teacher. I real like how he used psychology to help teach Faren. And it was interesting to see him work on a mental link with Spyro. It's like a better version of the Occulmency scenes from Harry Potter.
And this story does need Sparx. Please bring him back next chapter!
I wonder what Terrador has to say. It probably isn't good.
| coincidencless chapter 19 . 1/23
*shakes head* Oh Nexus, you're such a genius in combat but an absolute MORON when it comes to... oh... EVERYTHING ELSE!
Not much to say, I've been exhausted lately. Wonderful slice of life chapter that still progresses the story!
Why not sick Dark Spyro on Ragnor?
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/20
Love the part with Flash; his conversation with Gale was hard to get through for me...I know I lost my dad at a young age, and my mom became disabled only a few years after. The emotion there was tough.
Now for the second part; Nexus' confusion about remorse is well defined, and I love the fact that he is questioning it now. His conversation with Cynder is perfectly detailed, as I felt like I was there on the balcony with them, hoping they would figure something out.
In the future, I see these two dragons helping each other, and that is going to be a catalyst for Both Flash and Nexus' emotional change...or I'm wrong as usual.
Please! Update as soon as you 'possibly' can
| Tempest of Reach chapter 19 . 1/20
Like the development between Chinook and Flash, good to see the two of them getting along so well...
Also, nice to see Nexus is progressing... slowly... VERY slowly... but, he wants to change, even if he doesn't fully know it yet.
And now, time to sleep.
| Tempest of Reach chapter 18 . 1/20
Enigma sure likes hitting Chinnok.