|Reviews for A Bright Day|
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Mother's basement? Being snotty and contemptuous to potential readers isn't going to get you anywhere. Check your shirty attitude, please.
| luffyluffy chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Good good, but a few logistical problems regarding Bright. His personality is perfect, but you can remove the 'bright smiled er brightly' thing and just make it 'bright smiled brightly' because amusingly, it works.
Also, feddie collars are stiff and don't turn up. Other than thatm, great job yo!