|Reviews for MSCL Vignettes|
| Guest chapter 58 . 12/19/2016
Loving the new chapters! Especially Tino's thoughts about Angela. But so disappointed that nothing happened between Angela & Tino.
| CandyHearts22 chapter 58 . 11/18/2016
I really love this work. You're doing a great job with all the chapters and I'm always happy to see an update! Tino...what can I say? I adore him, almost as much as I adore Jordan. I love seeing his perspective on the world around him. He's unique and interesting and I'm always looking forward to seeing him pop up in chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next with all these lovable characters. Thanks for updating and sharing your story!
| Guest chapter 61 . 10/31/2016
I love the way you write. Have you published any original pieces? like your own characters because when i read any of your stories i feel like i am there. Are you thinking of writing more mscl chapters? will they have another baby? will angela ever find love?
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2016
I love your writing style. This story is heartbreakingly realistic... reminds me of The Way We Were.
| lizzie1283 chapter 56 . 10/4/2016
Still reading! Loved the peek into a Jordan/Graham hang out, and the Sharon/Angela phone call. Thank you for still writing MSCL :)
| Guest chapter 56 . 8/25/2016
I still check back for updates about once a month. Please keep posting whenever you have time! Loved this about Jordan & Graham hanging out in the newest Ch 56. Your stories are so realistic & true emotionally they just pull me in. I still want to low if anything happened with Tina & Angela!
| debbiejallen chapter 56 . 8/17/2016
Definitely still reading this and still loving it. Hope you post more soon great job.
| Reshma chapter 56 . 8/6/2016
I got so excited when I received an email that you updated this story. MSCL life fan fiction is slowly becoming non-existant, which makes me sad. I love this chapter and how easy it is. I can totally imagine being at that dinner and seeing the exchange between Jordan and Graham. My favorite part of your writing is the attention to details, like propping Edith on his shoulders, and how Graham rubs the back of his head when in deep thought. You really know the characters well. The show and characters will always have a special place in my heart, and I want to thank you for doing a great job at keeping it alive.
| Guest chapter 54 . 7/18/2015
So excited to see a new chapter! Especially since it's about Angela and Tino. I still want to know more... specifically if they ever hook up!
| ella chapter 56 . 3/15/2015
I love reading your work! it's amazing how well you have develope all this personalities with little material given, powerful material but little never the less. I do hope that you post more, I love hearing about tino and Angela and maybe Daniel marring Brian ...haha... anyway thank not only for giving this series closure but a new fresh start and a great continuation!
| Guest chapter 53 . 1/9/2015
I am re-reading lots of these chapters and loving them even more the 2nd time around. I still want to read more about Angela & Tino and if anything happens between them.
| 77Steph chapter 4 . 12/29/2014
Ha, yea Angela, poor Jordan. This is why everyone always hates the cheerleader. A bit stereotypical, but definitely adds to the back story and character development to help answer the all important, "Why is J the way he is?"
| 77Steph chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
So, one of my favorite chapters of this lovely, long work. You got the details just right, definitely takes me back to an early 90s scene. Loved the basement party and band name/lyric checks.
The relationship between J and Lisa is fairly interesting. You do a good job of setting up the fact that she is very motherly to him. The sibling dynamic between them is very...open. I mean he loses his virginity in her bed and she almost helps engineer it. Never in a million years for my brother and I. Did you have a particular inspiration for their dynamic, or did you just need J to have a mother-ish figure? She is almost a confidant in addition to a mother, IMO.
| 77Steph chapter 2 . 11/26/2014
Interesting back story with the whole baseball thing and connection to his sister and Tino's family.
| 77Steph chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
I really like the idea that you are exploring Jordan's background so thoroughly. I am curious what at the end of the chapter makes him kiss her as a response to her not wanting to feel better (distraction for her, goodbye, its now or never, etc.)
Question about the time line. Your dates and ages make Jordan born in 1977. So he would be a 17 year old junior during the fall of 1994. If he was held back twice, wouldn't he be 18 as a junior? Is my math/reasoning or facts wrong? Maybe you have different reasoning?
Thanks for the stor(ies). I am trying to retread and review them.