Reviews for New Rider in Berk
Nell chapter 10 . 1/5
Ugh! First you make your character freaking PERFECT now you are doing OC x Hiccup. So dumb and overused. I'm going to look for a decent story now, which this is way far from.
Nitro chapter 20 . 7/7/2014
Nice
Mystery chapter 20 . 6/23/2014
I love the this story a lot. You should totally have a sequel if you did that I would totally read it. I am a huge of how to train your dragon. Keep up the good work.
KellyRiker chapter 20 . 2/5/2014
think you need to have someone fall for dagur. i felt sad that hiccup got a family, became chief, and defeated Alvin when Dagur only helped kill the outcast and watched as Ech fell in love and married hiccup. not hat i think anything is wrong with that mind you, i just wished Dagur had found someone and mended ties with berk, in Night and the Fury, he did call Hiccup brother, so i was expecting a litle more permance i guess. brothers could mean brothers in arms, or brothers by blood, or even that two young chiefs are brothers, there no matter what. sorry for thelong review, i hope these are good points for you to make your anwer on.
soso chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
suddenly a loud roar came from no where but Astrid and ech dd not notice until stormfly started going back.
" what are you doing stormfly?" then a never seen before dragon came and snatched ech storm fly has a baby with toothless and its the night nadder lolol tyen hiccup sucks astrids tits
Matthew chapter 20 . 8/6/2013
I liked it, I think in a sequel there are crossbreeds for other dragons, like a Timberjack and a Nightmare.
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 17 . 7/1/2013
what the what!?
did not expect that...did not expect that at all...
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 16 . 7/1/2013
omg so cute X3 BLUELIGHT!
0_0 wait WHAT!?
...Clovis' egg!?
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 15 . 7/1/2013
...well at least there is an alliance...
BLUELIGHT YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
and now I'm crying even harder now darn it
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 14 . 7/1/2013
D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
WHY D'X
*sniffs* dragons...twerlwelkjtgtwhjbghtwjr Murderous Dragon has to go down!
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 13 . 7/1/2013
*shudders* oh gosh _
a dragon...kthewouigtyruighfur
oh man oh man oh man oh man
DEAR FUDGE WHY
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
*face palms* now I'm thinking of Pokemon where its like "A wild dragon appeared" and the options come up...oh dear fudge...
NEW DRAGONS aaaaaaand there they go...
at least they COOLED down Dagur XD haha get it cause...they breathe ice...shutting up...
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 11 . 7/1/2013
again what just happened XD
I am laughing so hard pffff hahahahahaXD
oh gosh Dagur I remember him...but wow smooth Hiccup smooooooooooooooth
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 10 . 7/1/2013
htwejtwtjrwtiwrjn what just happened XD
...I think I flailed my arms a bit there XD pfff
cute
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
0_0 uh oh! Alvin's tiiiiiicked
Bluelight X3 naw! Cute name
YES CLOVIS IS OKAY X3
awww sad face :C
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