|Reviews for Master of My Soul|
| Quest chapter 43 . 3/8
Thank you so much I was crying when I finished my parents looked at me weirdly anyways your such a great author I hope you do more stories
| Andalucio chapter 43 . 3/10
Just finished reading the chapter PLUS the deleted part. I absolutely LOVE it! The ceremony was perfect and the vows were making me want to break out in a hysterical tear-fest (if everyone in the house wasn't asleep, lol), very very beautiful.
As for the deleted scene, I found it very heart warming and the symbolism behind it really moving. It made me feel like Jake truly wants to atone for his past mistakes, that he wants to show Seth how far he is willing to go for their love. As for the whole dom/sub relationship, I feel like Jake took it upon himself to prove the breaking of the bonds of master and slave so they can be equals not only in their spiritual aspect of their love, but also in their physical love as well. With that said, I still love you and the story, and I understand your decision to remove it from the chapter and I respect it.
I am very excited and shivering in my boots for the epic conclusion of MoMS. It will be an end of an era when the final chapter is posted, bittersweet.
I've been following your work for years and this is my all-time fave.
| XxXJezabelXxX chapter 43 . 3/9
Oh my god ;; Seriously I never thought I would read this story again after my internet was gone. Its written beautifully and I cried like baby. I hope you finish this soon. You my friend are amazing and thank you for writing this story /
| Seylin chapter 43 . 3/9
Love, love, love! I wasn't expecting Harry to show up, so that was a nice touch and I'm really pleased with how it was handled. The ceremony was beautiful and I nearly teared up during those vows. I'm off to read the "deleted" scene now!
| Hoshimi Cullen chapter 43 . 3/9
I loved it, the ceremony was the most spiritual one that I have read. I could feel there emotion and I even cried, loved it.
I truly enjoyed how Jack made Seth father live the same heel that he made Seth live throw, death would have been to good for him.
I'm sorry you felt the end to fleet the ending, I would have really loved to read it. I have loved this story from day one and have been waiting patiently for this night. Don't let negativity push you down, you should post your story like you want regardless what anyone saids, it's your vision and we are but your lovely readers.
Love your work, can wait for the next chapter.
| Lian.TheDemon chapter 43 . 3/8
Hey!... It's been a long time since I've written a review to this story. With my studies and all that, I've barely had time to do it...
I was one of the few who read the chapter before you deleted it, and when I read it I thought it was awesome what you did... It was like the last thing that Jacob could do to finally be a good man for Seth, give him something that was prohibited by their society of Dominants-Submissives, something very important for dominants... So I bloody loved it... And just a minutes ago I wanted to re-read it (just in case I missed something in my previous review, it have happened before)... I read that you deleted that part, just because a bunch of (sorry for the next word) assholes that I dare to say have never read a good story like this, and always want the things like they've imagined it (Jacob, tall and dominant; and Seth, small and submissive)... They don't really get the meaning of FanFiction, that it allows to create a new world with the characters of a known story...
I'm pretty upset that you've deleted it, and I'm going to say something I don't usually do, but I think it's for the best... If you don't return the story like it was before of it, I'll never read another of your stories... Your stories are good the way you wrote it, mainly because they are YOURS... You can do whatever you want with them, it's the meaning of being an author... It's like I didn't want Voldemort to die, and wrote a letter and make a worldwide fuse for the author to change it... she wrote it like that, and if I didn't like it, it's my problem, not hers... And it's a warning, I'm not joking...
AND I'll write a good review of the past chapters WHEN you have returned this chapter to its original form... I hope you're okay and I love your stories, but I didn't like this thing you did, I'm sorry...
| WolfPacFaan chapter 43 . 3/8
What the hell?... Why is there stuff missing. Last night I was reading and my iPod died, so I went to sleep and now this has happened... Why? The wedding scen and everything was fricken amazing. I wanted to see what it was that Embry was going to continue to tease Seth about. Please, leave the chapter to how it was, it was so much better. Please, who cares what a few people said, it was fricken amazing and you shouldn't have to have changed it after spending all your free time working on it.
Please, put it back to how it was, please.
| beachflowergirl chapter 43 . 3/8
Thanks for the update. I await the rest of the updates. Love this story it is the only story I've been with this long.
| TurnItUp03 chapter 43 . 3/8
I had the opportunity to read the entire chapter before the last bit was removed, and now I'm finally able to review.
As it goes, I'm glad that Seth is a lot stronger then he was to begin with. For Harry to return like the coward he is to expect Seth to welcome him with open arms is just like another slap to Seth's face. I'm glad that Seth hadn't caved by giving the man a chance. Thankfully Jacob gave him what he deserved, death would be pity on the man, he deserved to live with same punishments he had given to his son.
The vows were touching, and glad to finally see their wedding day take place. Though I had to admit, I was kind of hoping since their was a bit of a family reunion in the beginning, that maybe Leah would have shown up, but, I'm guessing she'll be coming soon. Like I said, I'd love to read about their reunion as well as the birth of the children.
As for the portion that was deleted. I have to say that I wasn't a big fan of Jacob bottoming, especially since his character practically killed others for others to know of what he was. To see him submit to Seth, I wasn't sure if I agreed with it or not. But I still very much enjoyed the gesture given from the Alpha, I think it was his way of declaring that he would never hurt Seth ever again...
This has been all great, and it's sad to see it near it's end. I do hope you have another up your sleeve.
| alittleboy chapter 43 . 3/8
Jacob bottoms? You've really made a mess this time!
| Brookie Bea chapter 43 . 3/7
ugh this story is just so beautiful words can not express so sad to see it ending but happy to to see the end :)
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/7
No words to describe such a chapter! Wonderful, beautiful, extreme, hot, there is just not a right word to describe your talent! I have fallen in love with this stories! They are so wonderful and emotional! You have a talent and I hate to say it, but stop give up fanfiction and write a real book because you have the talent for greatness! I am a reader, ask anyone who knows me. I went to Mexico for a trip once and I didn't bring one but seven books for a week! I am saying this because I meet a lot of authors through reading and I feel like I know you! You have the potency for greatness! Don't you ever waste it! This is a wonderful story and maybe you could write one just like it with different creatures and characters but this would make a wonderful book! I am just trying to tell you that u are a very very very talented person! Do not waste a talent that is so beautiful for my sake! Write wherever you want whenever you are! And if you do not want to publish I totally understand! But at least write stories to yourself and your followers because your story makes my day!
P.S. Maybe I do not want to contradict myself but please continue your writing here because if would just hate to lose you!
P.S.S. I don't know if you have considered my idea of having a sequel in Quil's borther's view! I was thinking of a book along the lines of him being the leader of a resistance made of a buch of runaway subs and they are fighting against evil and somehow it clashed with Seth being pregnant and everything changes but what I am trying to say is that I would really like a sequel and if you chose to do that I would love if it could show the subs in a fight you hate dominants mode! And then Xavier finds love with a dom and everything of his opinions changes! I know I am going big! Shit maybe too big but I know that you can do it!
P.S.S.S sorry for the longest review!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/7
As sweet as it was for Jake bottoming plz let it be the first and last time I just can't picture him bottoming EVER shouldn't happen again didn't expect it an I couldn't read it at all I skimmed last parts of the chapter otherwise thank you for updating we really appreciate it
| Guest chapter 43 . 3/7
Thank you for the updated I've been waiting so long for this I truelly appriciate it - I have to be honest though I didn't enjoy the last half of it an Alpha bottoming just doesn't sit well with me - while its truelly sweet of Jake to bottom I hope its a one time thing it just feels wrong sooo wrong to me - yes they equals but his an Aphla eeewww its just wrong so wrong - I hope you stay strong and sorry for posting as guest was too lazy to log in - plz jake can never bottom again special occasions yes
| AustenCharlotte chapter 43 . 3/7
Great chapter, sad its almost over!