Reviews for Power of Hatred, Heart of Fire
madmanmark666 chapter 5 . 3/29
This is a pretty good story so far hope you update soon
PhazonLordKaito chapter 4 . 10/8/2014
is naruto going to gain the rinnegan?
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 5 . 7/14/2014
Please update! :D
1066wthec chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
again why tnten...

good chapter though
1066wthec chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
nice, why tenten though... theres nothing special about her. Yugito offers so much more plotwise (and other ways too... )
Darksider13 chapter 5 . 4/19/2014
Tenten should have biol release
Benya chapter 4 . 3/10/2014
WTF... this story, is the most horrible thing that i have read, ever. it make no sense what so ever.
Akuma-Heika chapter 5 . 1/23/2014
Ch3
For the most part wind would merely increase the power, the exception to this is if he gained very powerful wind control which would than let him control the flames. Technically if Blaze Release works as I think it does it probably has even less control than wind. (I believe Blaze Release is likely Plasma which would be hard to control considering even air is denser).

Will he gain the Rinnegan? Madara got it by bonding the DNA of Hashirama (a Senju) to him in his old age, but Naruto, an Uzumaki (and thus a Senju Branch Family member), had the DNA of Madara added when he was very young and his body more malleable. The fact the DNA only needed to change his eyes, instead of every cell in his body like Madara needed, would make it even easier for his body to adapt/evolve the Rinnegan.

How will Minato stabilize the seal when he is dead? If the Sandaime sacrificed himself how could he cause the Shinigami to screw up its seal work? (Naruko is better for the twin position!)

Yugito and Karui! Please add them to the Rinnegan Naruto challenge! (and Naruko if you are fine with fantasy incest, although considering he awakened the Rinnegan and thus his DNA mutated to that of a god would they still be siblings?)

Ch4
Considering Kakashi died fighting pain not even full frontal assault like Hinata no we cannot blame her. She has proven in the most recent arc to be better than Sakura in any case.

Did you mean Tsunade’s and Shizune’s style of fighting DIDN”T lie in his?

I am guessing you meant he’s DONE far more.

BUT he had far greater strength.

Why did Itachi donate Shisui’s left eye? Never mind. Just realized with it being an EMS (and Naruto’s Senju blood) it probably does not have the 10 year limit. It may not have any besides chakra use (which is tiny apparently considering a crow had enough chakra to use it on Itachi who had unlimited chakra). With his lack of morals he would likely make liberal use of it (such as Danzo and Hiruzen, the Daimyo of Fire).

On the other end Tenten is only ten and she is female so that means less muscle growth compared to Naruto who was pushed to the extremes and is of Senju descent (The Body of the Sage [the Nartuoverse equivalent to Cosmos-Primordial God of Order]).

What chunin jutsu did Naruto use against Tenten?

It’s NOT a boring dream at all.

NaruSetsuna? PLEASE!

Naruto means maelstrom. A Maelstrom is a poweful whirlpool not a storm.

As an Uzumaki Naruto is descended from the youngest son.

Would she really hold a rivalry with Tenten? She doesn’t care to be the best only to be strong enough to protect Sasuke.

Curious to see Hinata. You seem like one of the decent Hinata writers. It’s annoying listening to people proclaiming her worthless and in the same breath start speaking of Sakura like she is Jesus H. Christ.

Ch5
Based on how chakra is created Lee probably has a ton of it. He has a strong will meaning a lot of Yin Energy(Chakra) and his body is fit to the extreme and thus a lot of Yang Energy. His reserves are therefore likely rivalling an Uzumaki or Senju. His network is what is deformed which prevents him from sending out his chakra in a controlled manner. His cells themselves are fine.

What would your Uzumaki Nagato rank as?

How did she become a ninjutsu master? Gai and Tsunade do not focus on them. (Gai is said to be decent at them though).

The God’s Cry School is always awesome. Will she learn just their sword techniques or everything? The School specializes in swords but they also focus on making their students living weapons.

I believe Jiraiya and Tsunade are in their early 50s. The joke with Tsunade was worth a few laughs though.

What are the stats of Sage Jiraiya?

Tsunade broke the scale-twice lol.

Your pic does have Rinnegan Madara…just saying.

Keep up the great work!
Akuma-Heika chapter 2 . 1/23/2014
Ch1
Agreed wind is better! Especially since he uses a gunbai. Wind chakra flow would be far more useful after all.

Would she have time to flail around and even attempt to drop and roll? Those flames burn at a few thousand degrees Celsius. Considering what happens when a person is close to a nuke that goes off Guren would be ash in micro if not nano seconds. A little sad Guren didn’t join Naruto. Will Karin or Tayuya join him? The first is family after all.

Ch2
In Kishi’s defense those other ways probably don’t exist for the Japanese words. Its translated as legendary sucker but the JP word for sucker there I believe is used for someone easily fooled/tricked not one who sucks (objects).

The fact he is a Uzumaki at his base makes him a Senju as well being a Senju first so Tsunade defending him is not that surprising.

You are forgetting one thing though. The EMS uses far less chakra in its jutsu than the MS. Considering his Uzumaki blood and his intense training and better diet Naruto should be able to use multiple Mangekyou jutsu in a fight. His chakra should be rivaling canon Shippuden Sasuke’s right now and he was able to use several MS jutsu without the EMS in a single fight.

With how Amaterasu works Orochimaru would have been dead. The heat would have atomized his head. Complete instant kill.

…I like hyoton the bet out of those options.

Also, YES ADD FEMHAKU!

I still like wind fire combo better and with his dead bone pulse the wind nature would be better overall. He doesn’t need to make the bones sharper but making them saws that cut on the cellular level? BADASS! However I have to bring up the Sasuke’s Blaze Release is made up of Fire Lightning. That would be an excuse for keeping the lightning if you really like it. Amaterasu alone though would give you the heat needed. It burns at the tempt of the sun after all.

For resurrection of the dead I bring up two points: Edo Tensei is a Fuinjutsu and it is a Senju Clan jutsu. Naruto is a prodigy of the former and adopted son of the Head of the Later. If he improves it then there is no reason he couldn’t perform it like Kabuto but without the sacrifices making it far more useful.

On your challenge I have a few questions: How would he become 2/3 youkai? From my memory it is near impossible for someone to get that kind of blood scenario. Is it ? Then again at he would be in a constant form that lies between the two. Next question: what about his birth mother? By wearing her fear do you mean the Kyuubi’s fear? What does it do for each of the modes of use (I believe there were three ways of a hybrid to wear someone’s fear: one being an all-out attack another a armor change for lack of a better phrase)? Why would he fight the clan he leads? The Nura would still fall under him his increased power would make it even more likely.

On the Shaman King challenge is it truly a Spirit of Darkness since it can use phtons and light as a medium? Might I suggest claiming it to be a Spirit of Light instead? That would allow it to use all three of those mediums (shadows are formed from light hitting physical objects after all). Hmm just read up the Element Spirits in SK are based on the Greek Elements. The Fifth JP element is Mu-Void (cannot remember the older term for it). The Void can also refer to the Heavens however. Much like the Greek Elements the Fifth Element is a Godly one. So maybe that would be best. Spirit of the Void. Fits the darkness concept but the Heavenly aspect fits the light. Also from my research the SoF devours souls not because it is young but because its power was sacrificed to the god of the dead for Hao to come back. Although it seems like they can all eat souls regardless. SoF just had a great need to do so.

Great challenge ideas!
MyssakerQQ chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
Is the story discontinued?
VanitasTheFool.1 chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
please update hatred heart of fire.
Shikoi the God of Death chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
When does next chapter come out? It'd be a waste to see this down the drain.
frytrix chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
Great Chapter. You did a great job on this one.
frytrix chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
To make a Good and fun story for Your Readers to read. Make sure Your Chapters are over the double the size of Your Author notes.
frytrix chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
It is one thing to Give naruto 2 bloodlines but to do it to others as well wich is going to be a main part of the story is to overdo Things. You might as well give everyone in Your story blodlines at this rate.
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