|Reviews for Be Still|
| GWBear chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
A sweet and sad story. Sometimes Heralds and Companions die from more mundane dangers too, as this story shows...
| truthsetfree chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Those song lyrics are definitely against site rules. I won’t report you, but there are others out there who would. As such, I certainly hope you have this backed up somewhere, because it’s really well done. Honestly though, if you removed the lyrics, I don’t think you’d really lose anything.
Excellent job showing hypothermia. In fact, just excellent job showing instead of telling throughout this entire piece.
Great story structure.
Nice job on word choices.
Your OC’s were original, yet read as canon characters.