|Reviews for Wisp POV Outtake|
| Twimima7 chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
It would be nice to have a sequel of her future withe Edward.
| aqua-love-angel-13 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I like it! The switch between simple words and phrases when she's awake, compared to when she's asleep, lets you see a little bit of whats hidden in side.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Need more St. Berry!
| Smusic chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I loved this outtake. It was great to hear what is going on in Wisp's mind. Many, many thimbles for sharing that with us!
| Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Thimbling is so cute.
| deedee cullen chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Its very interesting to get a look into Wisp's mind.
| SILVERLINING67 chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
| Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
This was so sweet and I loved seeing what she thought about Edward. I hope you do a WPOV again. :)
| tulips3 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Very nice, that was so sweet but sad also.
| DreamQuill chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
*sniffle* Her mind is so innocent despite what she's gone through. They must have gotten her really young but she understands the book so school age? I love the way she thinks of her Edward and their cabin as Neverland. It's sweet.
| ickaren chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I have always wondered about abstract thought without proper words. Do people who are confused over proper words think clearly? Edward wonders about this in regard to Wisp, and I was thinking of that as I read this Wisp POV. Here, her sleeping mind has words, but she also seems to understand the book reading more than conversations. I wonder if that is because of previous experience with books, and the fact that words from people clearly became painful and she blocked them out, except for specific small words that she need to know to avoid beatings.
Lots to think about...
| sue.9112 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Very nicely done!
| FreeSpiritkaren chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
| NotTooOldForThis chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I am really 'enjoying' this story ... although that doesn't seem like an appropriate description. You paint lovely pictures; I feel like I could be in the room.
| AlexJade chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
This is such a heartbreaking story...
So no we know that there is James, Bad Dr.G, a man with tats on his arms, someone she calls father and her daddy...or I wonder if the last two are the same guy? Is it the person who kidnapped her? What if it is her real dad? OMG!
I haven't been upto date with what happened but who needs non-fictional drama here? Don't we all read this to escape that type of "real" drama? Forget the haters. You do your thing...They're just jealous.