|Reviews for Through a Mirror, Refracted|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
What a nice story, I lie how in character it is
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Love it, great story
| WhiteKnightro chapter 12 . 9/29/2012
As Superman says at the conclusion of II, “Sorry I've been away so long. I won't let you down again.” But I’m just a man and hardly super, so it may happen again. :)
“Bending over to rest her elbows on the stone, she rests her head in her hands. ‘I don't even know why you're with me. I'm so fucking screwed up.’” This is a key, real moment. This is the kind of discussion real people would have at this point, not the kid show BS crafted by creators that clearly bailed on something they were not equipped to address.
In fact this whole segment does what _should_ have happened in the show if it was being written with an eye on character development and not laughs. Did I mention how the show bailed?
I did get a little lost during the exchange you created on using the el word. Some attribution would have quickly righted me. Maybe it was just me.
The sandwich moment from her offer, to her eating it are absolutely TRUE. Very nicely done.
I wished that we got a little sense from your text about it being cold on the fire escape or hot. Do they smell rain? Y’know, just some placement in the world.
Minus that sort of business this was still many kinds of delightful.
Another great installment. Waiting to see how to inject reality into the insane, “iLove You”
No pressure. :)
| Termite Tornado chapter 12 . 9/22/2012
Perfect! Perfect chapter!
| Termite Tornado chapter 9 . 9/22/2012
She gets the talk... he gets the smile. Perfect
| xonessienichole chapter 12 . 9/20/2012
Read this sotry in like half an hour it's soo good! Can't wait for the next update! (:
| ReadNWrite4U chapter 11 . 9/19/2012
Now only is you could make "But Carly cares about me" comment and Dan's clumsy attempts to push the Sam hates Freddie and Freddie loves Carly relationships make sense. Really what was the points of anybody relationship with anybody if it has no bearing on thier future interactions.
I'm sad to hear this maybe your only story in this universe. Like you I'm older than the average iCarly fan and looks for more mature writing in my fanfiction. I will definitely have to check out some of your other works.
Sorry for the continuation. I'm typing this on my iPhone and a finger slipped and hit a wrong button and yeah. However not sorry for leaving you two reviews. You deserve this and so much more. If I was a gifted writer I would definetly pimp your story.
| ReadNWrite4U chapter 12 . 9/19/2012
I simply adore this story. The character study's are so well done. I found myself reading them and linking moments together in my mind that were previously unlink. My favorites would have to be the stolen moments. The moments between them were prefect. I could clearly picture them in my head. I thank you for these moments. It's great to see someone make sense of the craziness the show was intent of showing down our throats. Your introspect regarding how Seddie got from iDate Sam & and Freddie to iCan't Take It was brilliant. What a great way to describe their lovey dubey-ness in the latter episode and the following one. I always felt they were so out of character now their behavior is completely understandable.
I can't wait to read your take on iLove You. It felt too much like they just gave up on the relationship. I always wish Freddie would have fought for their relationship more. Anyway, I'm sure you will come up with something that put these feelings to rest for me. Now
| Mike2101 chapter 12 . 9/19/2012
I love the omnipresent POV. To me, it is far easier to shift between our protagonists this way, rather than a somewhat clumsy use of the "XXXX's POV" labels.
Aood writer can make it clear which character's thoughts we are reading. And you ARE a good writer.
I am enjoying the introspection.
Obviously, you have the dialogue down pat... you cribbed a bit from the show itself, but then as you elaborate and expand, you still have much of the correct rhythm and phrasing.
| hellokittii16 chapter 12 . 9/19/2012
So I've always wondered what happened between those episodes and I love your story because its going how I so pictured everything and it's a nice reminder of their relationship :') sigh update soon please 3
| pigwiz chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
ditto the last review, except for a pile of uncertainty brought on by anger... anger due to her perception of being inferior, of being unworthy of his feelings.
| pigwiz chapter 7 . 9/18/2012
This is the way it is when you find them... you wind your way into their world, as they do into yours. Soon, without any cognizant thought, you're taken, and it's the little things that let you know.
| pigwiz chapter 6 . 9/18/2012
This one caught me at the end. Her insecurity... sure that her happiness is doomed to fail, just because that's what she's used to, that's the way it works in her world. Even the 'hate you' exchange is refreshing for her. It's like shaking an apple tree for a fresh, ripe juicy apple, and only getting a leaf.
| pigwiz chapter 4 . 9/18/2012
You get the angst award for this chapter... your portrayal of him is superb. Restless, disjointed... perfect.
| seddie26 chapter 12 . 9/18/2012
love the stolen moments they are good writen