Reviews for Betwixt and Between
Liliom99 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Oh no poor boys! Jasper dear is apparently going to make it, but he doesn't remember? And poor Edward, this has to be so hard! In few words you described the whole family situation very clearly. I liked that Bella consider them both daddies, that is a story I want to read! Loving your new story so far, I look forward to next chapter. Thanks! Hugs, Lil
Moflo19 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
WOW What a first chapter! What is a man to do when his gay lover doesn't remember being gay & doesn't remember loving him? Can't wait to see how you tackle this one!
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Hello. Oops! He doesn't recognize Edward, i.e., some amnesia? Due to brain damage from the fall, more or less. I wonder if Edward will respect his wishes to "get away from him" or if he will continue his vigil at the hospital, his bedside, etc? I am sure he will get Alice in there to explain, but I expect Jasper to get kind of violent when he doesn't remember, kind of par for the course. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
Songbird5 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I love your stories but I struggle very much with anything that is not Bella/Edward. For you I will try as this seems promising, I loved the cliffie and I'm a fan of a little bit of drama. Xxx
stoker fangirl chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
You've got me hooked already. And I snorted (just a little; it's a serious scene) when you used the hammer of Thor metaphor! Looking forward to this story as it unfolds. Thanks for writing.
bbbluez chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Oh no! Evil to leave it there.
acct-delted chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Promising, for sure! How can you be so awesome?
Marie One chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
WOW, he is missing some memory.
Jessypt chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
This... "Look. You need to call my wife. Her name is Alice. You need to call her right now." TOTAL GUT PUNCH and SOUL RIPPER and YOU ARE EVIL and MY HEART HURTS!

Ok... got that out of my system. Make it better please. JS

On a more serious note, I can't imagine how sad this is for everyone. I mean we haven't of course seen Alice's reaction, but how painful would it be to have your spouse tell you that he's gay and you end up divorced, only to have him come back later and not even realize all that had happened, maybe that he is/isn't gay (obvs that could be considered controversial and I do NOT mean it that, I think you know that), and then probably later to have it all happen again.

Then for Edward... the line in here that made me ache even before I realized I would: "Alice had been Jasper Whitlock's first love. Edward Cullen had every intention of being his last." And that whole part at the end...

And for Jasper... how confusing to wake up with some man you don't recognize and then eventually to find out you divorced your wife and are with this person...

DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU ARE DOING WITH ME?! I'm rambling and already a mess. NOT NICE. NOT NICE AT ALL.

But I love you and can't wait for the healing and love and the journey. Always the best.

Jess xoxo
KM525 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Wow! Hooked & heartbroken! Cannot wait for more.
Cullen Cousin chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
OOOOO... The dreaded amnesia rears it's ugly head! Love the plot!

Excellent chapter!

CC
Angeldolphin01 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I love it.
CCHemmingsworth chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Damn, shit got real. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I really like the way this strory is beginning. Edward is left with his mouth hanging open while Jasper doesn't remember him at all. In fact, he is asking for his wife, Alice. Really good story line
EdwardsKitten chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
That's gotta suck.
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