Hey can you write more

I first read this fic back in 2016 and then all but forgot about it. The other day, certain WHUMPY scenes came to me from this fic.

And here I am, I've gone and reread the whole thing.

I doubt that you will ever see this review. But in case you do, there are some things you should know.

1. This fic is brilliant.
2. The plot and whump are excellent
3. You really need to finish it.

One more thing. I am highly tempted to write a continuation. Consider it an alternative ending.

If I do write a continuation on your behalf I will totally link your name and original fic. Also if I did, I would just focus on Tony and Loki's POV.

just stick with the main story line and how about facilitating the stored up assets that were found in Italy to reboot Loki but please for love of God finish the story not kidding I know about life and everything but girlllll

beautiful story but warn people for 34

on chapter 17 now and I new it, not the other thing, but this thing I knew it. that female dog. Oh my god I'm gonna Read on,oké this is A great Story .

I am on chapter 4 now I like the fact that you took time to set up the characters. youre also making me very curious as to why Loki is in there for so long and why Thor hasn't done anything yet but I guess we will find out in chapters to come.

never one to leave hate but i dont like this fic at all.
its torture followed by more torture and people being tricked/manipulated by the villain and honestly its just genuinely depressing.
obviously this fic is popular so thats good for you.
im going to go read something that makes me happy, good luck with future fics since this one seems abandoned.

Great sorry.. so sad to see it abandoned

OK I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER IMMEDIATELY PLEASE I'M GONNA CRY GIVE ME MORE, MORE HURT TONY, MORE LOKI AND TONY FRIENDSHIP PLEASEEEE? AMAZING JOB

So good! I couldn’t put it down please update soon

I think you're really talented but has this finished now or...?

Please continue the story, I want an ending to this amazing story! It's so addictive to the point I spent my whole day reading this :)

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I can't deal with all these Loki emotions

I don't know who's most likely to kill these guys, Thor, one of the other Avengers, or me