Reviews for Ambivalence |
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![]() ![]() That little end speech was sad... |
![]() ![]() Loki is 17,I font think you're legally an adult till your 18? I like the ending. I like how they get along and take care of each other |
![]() ![]() Nawwwwwwwww I hope this doesn't set them back |
![]() ![]() YAS! Aww those two care about each other like buddies! So kind |
![]() ![]() So she's pregnant with Lokis baby? Nice. I'm kinda jealous. Lol that sounds weird |
![]() ![]() Don't believe him! Trust Loki! |
![]() ![]() I hope they noticed how weak he sounded X'(((( Why didn't he just quickly tell them everything and beg for help?! I'm so mad! |
![]() ![]() I can't believe it! I can't believe it! I was right! That was a random guess! I was right! All I had to go on was cuts on his forearms and I was right about taking blood and extracting magic! I was right! You may call me Sherlock if you want! I am good! |
![]() ![]() Whatever they are doing to his magic,they can't stop his Jötun abilities,you can't stop genetics. He could have extinguished the coal with his ice powers |
![]() ![]() Ah! The Tony-Loki banter is so entertaining! Maybe they are blood-letting Loki and doing science to find the magical aspects of it,and the loss of blood is why he's so drowsy |
![]() ![]() Ahhh I'm so excited to read this story! It's so good so far and your writing style is fluent Loki is funny :D I don't want it to go to the team,I just want to read about the jail life of the two witty masterminds |
![]() ![]() ![]() Indeed Loki, what have you gotten yourself into? Good job on this chapter btw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() would love to see more! |
![]() ![]() I do hope that you write more |
![]() ![]() so. much. excitement. |