|Reviews for Origin of a Hero|
| Mr. Williams chapter 4 . 10/28/2012
I was wondering why you were using the two words Pegasi-unicorn? Why not Alicorn?
Alicorn is all the aspects of Earth Pegasi and Unicorn all together.
| El Rey Dorado chapter 5 . 9/30/2012
looking good can't wait for my story to come out i'm sure
| Crimson Banner chapter 2 . 9/9/2012
Looking good! :3