Reviews for To Remember
Queen Serenity chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Not bad. My only complaint is that I wish he hadn't turned her so fast.
Ashley chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I wanna be in Kelly's shoes . She is lucky . Clever dialogue .
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Lara F chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I was blown away by the soliloquy which you placed into the narrative's beginning . It was nicely done . " I'm going to ravish every inch of your body , and make you beg for my bite " OMG . The best line from the story . It had been some time since I read something so sensual and creepy in a single sentence . I am very picky regarding dialogues . I also enjoyed the scene in which he requests her for entering her household , due to the suspense as well sexiness built up in it . I am glad when a writer dares to bring out Jerry's dark and enticing side .