|Reviews for Blood Is Thicker Than Water|
| lilskystar chapter 6 . 7/29/2013
I don't want to sound rude or disrespectful but reviews won't always be happy and good! :P I am just a reader, passing by, reading your latest chapter so don't take it too seriously okay? :) I just want to help you to improve your story.
First, if I remember well, Naruto is 3 year-old in that universe but he has his 12 year-old mind. His parents see him as a 3 year-old kid right? If that's so, I don't think parents would give money to a toddler. I mean, kids don't know they value of money at that age. This time, Naruto knows the value of money but Kushi/Minato don't know about that. It would be better if you gave Naruto something else. Not money. Parents will give special activities, toys, candies (rare) or even a special dessert as reward for doing what they told to their baby. If Naruto is a 3-year-old kid, then that kind of conversation Mina/Kushina had with him wouldn't work. Kids don't understand long talks. You should make the explanations shorter and effective for a 3-year-old kid.
Secondly, I know you said you suck with spelling and grammar but there are obvious mistakes that you can clearly correct. EX: She knew what he MENT. I'm pretty sure you could have corrected it without problem but then, you do what you want with your story.
Last thing, Sasuke thinking like a teenager? Hm... it doesn't fit with his age in your story. A kid's behavior at his 3-year-old is still not develop like a teenager's behavior. A kid can't bite his lip for that reason, to kiss someone. Some actions don't go well with your young characters. I work with 4-5 years-old kids and many of them don't know the value of money, they just know it's a penny or quarter, nothing more. About their actions, they are still learning the basics and when I talk to them, I have to talk shortly, but clearly in a language they will understand. I know it's hard to write a story when you don't have any experience with children but you can ask me for ideas or help! ;)
That is all. :) I still enjoy your story! I love Minato as daddy! hehehe!
Work harder! :D
| ramen-luver101 chapter 6 . 7/7/2013
your not un-wanted to me
| naruto uzamaki namikaze angel chapter 6 . 6/23/2013
Please continue soon
| Quiet Ryter chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
Thanks for updating your story. This is an awesome chapter.:-) Please update your story.
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/19/2013
Lol have Naru say smart things xD They'll be like dafuq?
Oh and hatrers gonna hate
| LadyAngel123 chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
it would be funny if kushina had heard naruto scream kyuubi
| The Professor47 chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
DAMN I WANTED NARUHINA IN THE END. Oh well
| The Writing Jester chapter 6 . 6/19/2013
To-too cut-cute, ca-can't bre-breath...*Died from fluff suffocation*
| azfaerydust chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
Ah, just ignore that marine guy, there's always someone who will want to put you down. Your story is very cute & there aren't too many spelling errors. I say keep going.
| devil M chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
Aaaaaawwww soooo cute! I hope there will be a sakuxnaru moment
| Gyneth-Coral-Melody-Laterza chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
Oh my gosh! That was just so... ... ... ... ADORABLE! CX
| Xxsakurachan97 chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
UPDATE I AM GETTING SOO CONFUSED WHATS HAPPENING? WHAT DOES THE KYUBI MEAN! Plzs update
| Xxsakurachan97 chapter 4 . 6/9/2013
Plzs update more! It is sooooo damn KAWAII GOTTA READ MORE
| Arafell chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
I keep waiting for him to mention the Kyuubi, just to mess with his parents. Or maybe Kurama, and they just don't get the reference. XD
Nicely written. The atmosphere of the family is very in character.
| The Professor47 chapter 5 . 6/1/2013