Reviews for Domination |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Awesome story! Will you be updating it? : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have got to finish! Please! I'd like to know what happens. And boy...so many clones for one man. Kinky. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update please! This is amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awkward |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story! Hope there will be more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. More chapters please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfect! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update again soon pleeasseee! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually like this one. Koodos to you. First ForstIron I've actually read through! To the favorites list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh girl i'm so done with you. I just can't- how do you even- GEEZ ! The idea to distract Tony while Loki is busy talking serious matters with his brother ? Genius. The contrast between the conversation full of lokifeels and the explicit noises Tony makes, that gives a situation both sad and hilarious at the same time. Like, I couldn't control my face; smiling, frowning, chuckling, blank, smiling again oh no worried expression and so on. To be honest I was half expecting Stark to say something like "Do you two mind, there are people who are trying to get laid!". But later, something like "I broke your clones" ? This made me laugh really hard. Oh Tony, there is no men like you. Maybe I'm speculating or searching too hard but it's like he was aware that Loki had some plan he didn't want him to know and he agreed to that because well, sex, and at this point he seemed to have completely forgotten what he had putting himself into with Loki and he only comes out when there is no more dolls to play with. But maybe he just doesn't care and adapts himself to every situation -oh hey Thor, what brings you here, you're still not bleeding how come, have you ever been gangbanged by Loki's clones ? Speaking of him, he's such a big nice puppy, at least he's kinda... accomodating? and I thank you for that. He speaks his mind to Tony and still he's not being forceful. Also I found it kinda funny how Loki seems only amused by Tony's whole behaviour, they are chatting freely and jokingly again, I almost regret when Loki was a still a cold-hearted superior-looking asshole. But okay, I'm like Tony, I wonder what the deal is about, to what purpose Loki needs him and fuck that cliffhanger (naturally I suppose it's either the Other or Thanos or whatever in this boat). This is why we can't have nice things. Needless to say I'm looking forward to the next chapter ! and as usual I'm sorry for my mistakes (I made plenty last time ugh), I swear they are like a nightmare to me, how I wish I was a native english speaker. Sorry this review only comes today, sometimes the idea of typing a constructive thing in English is kinda demoralizing. Anyway, keep up the great work :D PS: and here I thought that because of the delay I would have less things to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its been... so long. too long. need. another. chapter. to survive! *dies* |
![]() ![]() If its not been said yet, let it be known that you are fantastic ! I cant wait for the next one ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait, so… Tony tried to take out the thing that sinks into his chest? Or the entire thing? So confused. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tony trying to kill himself? Ah non! D: why you do that? This chapter made me really sad. D': Vulnerable Loki is the sexy, tho |