|Reviews for And so it goes|
| Fairyvixenmaiden chapter 1 . 2/10
I love this. Not often we read the POV from Takumi. Do you have another one? If not, I hope you do.
| hannaTree chapter 1 . 2/7/2015
what an ass Taku albeit charming !
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
| straYCat chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
This is a very realistic take on that scene and I really enjoyed reading it.
| Name Reader chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
I really like it! You're a good writer-makes it seem as if he thought that when went to her apartment! XD
| Mayuka chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Don't write like you're in first person but still formatting in third person. Just change it to first person if you're going to write with that kind of attitude.
I'd rather read this in past tense, it would be better.