Reviews for What Counts
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 21 . 6/28/2013
YAY! major steps being made! 3 3
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 19 . 6/28/2013
i loved your portrayal of hermione! poor severus can't catch a break! twice in a row the women in his life are cottoning on!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 18 . 6/28/2013
No! Bloody hell, Sev, you're forty-five, not sixteen. Grow up!

Some part of him snickered. He stifled a groan.

You really do save the best for last, don't you? hahaha!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 17 . 6/28/2013
gosh... i just love reading unrequited love.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 16 . 6/28/2013
"Well – how often does a hero show up at school, anyway?"

Potter narrowed his eyes at him, then his face cleared and he lifted an eyebrow. "Every day," he said pointedly, and with a satisfied smirk at Snape's sudden discomfort, turned toward his breakfast.

oh, perfect! great line.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 15 . 6/28/2013
well... that happened... i really liked the part where harry was talking, but i thought severus' response was a bit much... i think i would have preferred a one-liner, or a three-liner, from him.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 12 . 6/28/2013
i'd love to see sev interact with his gryffindors. such a strange and amusing concept, him being head of gryffindor.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 11 . 6/28/2013
Anything you need. Anytime.

i love the repetition. it's so powerful!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 10 . 6/28/2013
the way you write the conversations makes them sooo real!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
great chapter! i noticed something weird- you have more favorites than reviews! kids today...
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
he's gonna stay a bit! yayyyy!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
way to get him back to your place, snape. bow chicka wow wow! haha!
but seriously, wonderful writing.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
this is SO GOOD.
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
great chapter!
DanceswithHippogriffs chapter 2 . 6/28/2013
i really like this new snape! it's nice to see he's made progress.
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