Awesome story. I really like the different elements you've brought together.

What a waste of time and effort. 3 chapters in and I've yet to read anything original.

Sorry-jumped the gun there... I got so irritated by the author's note in chapter 5 about dark days and sunlit nights that I stopped reading to post a review complaining about the lack of logic. Returning to the story, I found you had already corrected it in the next paragraph.

Regarding your author's noteNot sure what you've been smoking, but sunset at 10 a.m. and sunrise at 11 p.m. is total garbage. Do a little Googling. Sunrise in Ushuaia is about 8 a.m. in September, getting progressively earlier as the month goes on. Sunset is about 7 p.m, getting progressively later as the day goes on. At extreme distances from the equator (i.e. close to the poles) there may be extremely long or short days (if you go far enough north the sun does not set at all on the summer solstice, and likewise far enough south and the sun will not rise on the same day due to the axial tilt of the planet. However, no matter how short the period of light or darkness may be, if there is a sunrise and sunset, they do not switch so that the darkness occurs only during the hours we generally call daytime. I know this is fiction, but really! Next you'll be telling us that people in Ushuaia get dry when they take a shower and get wet by rubbing themselves with fleecy towels!

I hope that Harry can lift his trousers up at the toilet without the help of "his" Hermione

Tadrith's fall part two. Probably even the same area.

I am glad that Harry is closer to Vera then he is to Soren and Kira. When he first met them it felt like he was just exchanging one trio for another.

Moody's trunk had one room sized compartment and six normal sized ones, not six rooms and one normal compartment.

Your saved I don't like the story though it's dangerous and scary Ha ha ha

LUNNA!

Rereading this again, and noticed the difference in the spelling of warsa (story) and wyrsa (how it was spelled in the Valdemar series) along with difference of eyes. Where it's white eyes, in Magic's pawn they had yellow pupilless eyes. Am I wright to think the warsa/wyrsa is just of spelling/language differeation that is natural of thousands of years? and the change of eyes is due to the evolution of the species?

Wow. I was seriously not expecting that. I cannot wait to see the ramifications :)

This is among the best explanations of magic and the like that I have come across. I adore this story and cannot wait to see the interesting directions that you take it in :)

Yay, you're back!

I would like to say that you are an amazing writer. From start to finish, this story had me. Thank you for that.