Reviews for Snow Point
Sammie chapter 24 . 6/17/2022
Book one down. book 2 up.
Guest chapter 19 . 6/17/2022
Deaths real name is Arikis.
Most people don't know this as it's only recorded in the Atlantaan language? The last decendants of Atlantis live in Ireland. A blond girl found in 1970 had Atlantaan dna in her and she has since been married had children and those children have had children so there is now more of them. Just smaller amount of by the way they are all magical real not pretend magic.
Raven chapter 19 . 6/17/2022
Stop drinking! Bad for the Twins.
Raven chapter 17 . 6/16/2022
Lily was actually born a McGregory .
Lord McGregory put her in the muggle family Evans to save her from being killed by a Dark Lord when she was barely 1 years old.
Raven chapter 15 . 6/16/2022
The castle is very alive. Its just the writer of this story is using its own version of the story. Harry Potter has many different versions the best ones are the ones where Harry never goes to Hogwarts.
Bad thing is most writers basicaly copy the books and movies instead of writing new stuff.
Mickey chapter 13 . 6/16/2022
Magic has been around a lot longer then 10,000 years ago.
Magical staffs have been found dating back over 26,000 years ago.
Raven chapter 12 . 6/16/2022
Quiet as a mouse.
She was quite a lady.
Gaius chapter 10 . 6/15/2022
lose as in He probably would lose the fight. You spelled the word loose as in The ropes were to loose around her.
Alexander Potter chapter 9 . 6/15/2022
You spelled time when the word you should've used was times and you put past and passed in the wrong places.
Raven chapter 9 . 6/15/2022
It's past not passed. Work on your english.
Denny chapter 9 . 6/15/2022
22 is old.
Cam chapter 7 . 6/15/2022
Spice it up more.
Raven chapter 5 . 6/15/2022
He has good company with Bella and Rosey.
jiromanawari chapter 8 . 12/3/2021
Do you not know the difference between then and than? Their and they're? Your and you're? My goodness, such sloppy writing. Shameful.
V.S. Lawson chapter 1 . 11/5/2021
hmm not that surprising. Anyone who read the books knows Hermonie has a vendictive streak. Its just more calculated and subdued than the twins. Example: Goblet of fire. The yule ball with Ron weasley. Yes she is a goody two shoes, but if she feels a prank is nessicary to get a point across, or as a distraction. She will 100%do it. Its just she doesn't unless absolutely necessary, because she feels her words and books have more sway than action. Even she has limits, its just really hard to reach those limits. She set birds upon Ron in 4th year. So yes she would totally set fireworks in the headmasters office if she needs a distraction, or got tired of people under estimating her. Those saying she is too sweet and goody two shoes to do this prank should remember she was the one to suggest the members of the DA sign a paper that would cause painful boils to appear on their skin if they betray the secret of dumbledores army in 5th year.
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