well done. great story. Miranda Fairgold is a favorite. this story arch falls inline with her work. great job. thanks

Book one down. book 2 up.

Deaths real name is Arikis.
Most people don't know this as it's only recorded in the Atlantaan language? The last decendants of Atlantis live in Ireland. A blond girl found in 1970 had Atlantaan dna in her and she has since been married had children and those children have had children so there is now more of them. Just smaller amount of by the way they are all magical real not pretend magic.

Stop drinking! Bad for the Twins.

Lily was actually born a McGregory .
Lord McGregory put her in the muggle family Evans to save her from being killed by a Dark Lord when she was barely 1 years old.

The castle is very alive. Its just the writer of this story is using its own version of the story. Harry Potter has many different versions the best ones are the ones where Harry never goes to Hogwarts.
Bad thing is most writers basicaly copy the books and movies instead of writing new stuff.

Magic has been around a lot longer then 10,000 years ago.
Magical staffs have been found dating back over 26,000 years ago.

Quiet as a mouse.
She was quite a lady.

lose as in He probably would lose the fight. You spelled the word loose as in The ropes were to loose around her.

You spelled time when the word you should've used was times and you put past and passed in the wrong places.

It's past not passed. Work on your english.

22 is old.

Spice it up more.

He has good company with Bella and Rosey.

Do you not know the difference between then and than? Their and they're? Your and you're? My goodness, such sloppy writing. Shameful.