|Reviews for Captive|
| fiction-mikana chapter 1 . 3/19
| acetwolf94 chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
ADD MORE PLEASE!
| Yellowmiki98 chapter 1 . 12/6/2017
Have you forgotten about this story?
| YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
| Mikayla Elwood chapter 1 . 8/24/2017
This is a good start are you going to continue?please do I would like to see what you come up with
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19/2017
Omg! JACKIE ! keep going. Ps the names lanChiXbluewings,,,,i coudnt login ,yoir an amazing writer
| DOCTORSINTHETARDIS chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
You should continue this story
| AppleSpongeCake chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
| awal216 chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Why'd you stop?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
They'll come yes they will
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Perhaps it is in proximity to the release date of the film and the freshness in your mind, but for all of the countless RotG fanfictions I have read, few are so well written as this. You have properly addressed all aspects of their characters as portrayed in the film very well. You have good attention to detail in determining what knowledge Jack and Pitch would each possess in accords to magic and other things. Their reactions are more than suitable for their situations. I am very pleased.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Fantastic. Thank you
| The Random Coyote chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Nice ideally like it
| Alva chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
Like so many others, I am holding on to the hope that this is not finished and needs to be continued!
-Girl with strange ideas.