|Reviews for Rough Edges|
| SophiaGrey chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
My heart froze at Dooms illusion of Tony without the reactor, I'm sadly gullible. Great job with this series. I can't wait to read more of your work!
| SophiaGrey chapter 6 . 12/4/2013
Wow, you must have a lot of storage space for all this pain your collecting!
| SophiaGrey chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Yessssssssss! These two fellas are totally worth any wait! I love your writing style!
| SophiaGrey chapter 3 . 12/4/2013
Wow, I never realized how much I enjoyed the sucking of hairy monkey balls, I thought it was an excellent chapter!
| SophiaGrey chapter 2 . 12/4/2013
I love this story!
| SophiaGrey chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
I am so so grateful for you writing this wellcome back defense of Loki, it was truely beautiful (in a kick ass kind of way)!
| Infinitechange chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
Very fun and cute.
| louisesnape chapter 7 . 11/14/2013
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Love this series of fics
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/24/2013
Excellent story. So sweet.
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
It's kinda weird with the Human Torch and Steve Rogers played by the same actor.
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
Coulson vote for number one SUPER NANNY.
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 4 . 8/23/2013
Odin, I think really does love Loki. Loki is just biased.
Frigga is awesome.
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 2 . 8/23/2013
Poor Loki. He thinks he can't be loved.
And maybe he can repair his relationship with Sif! They would be cute as sisters. OMG A FIC SHOULD BE WRITTEDN ABOUT THEM AS SISTERS. OR SIBLINGS. The tomboyish sister and the feminine brother. OMG I NEED TO FIND A FIC LIKE THIS.
| NX-Loveless-XN chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Loki and Tony with their weird makeshift family filled with bots and animal children awesomeness.
| ClaMiAl chapter 7 . 8/11/2013
Loved the story! It's a very nice continuation in this series, and I liked how it showed Loki's relationships with the Avengers and Tony and Thor develop. Sometimes I wished I could see a scene from another character's perspective, mostly because I was super curious what they would think about Loki, his actions, or his reactions to some event. But it was also fascinating to see everything through Loki's eyes.
The story was also nicely balanced in terms of action scenes, more emotionally loaded scenes and character and relationship development. It never grew boring or tedious or felt like it dragged on or anything like that and kept me reading and impatient to get back to reading it when I had to take a break. But, well, final exams have to be written, lol.
It was also very interesting to see Loki's children. Mostly, I've only seen them mentioned in fics, but this is the first one I've read where they actually played a bit of a bigger role and I got to 'see' them up close and personal. And apropos Loki's family...I like what you did with Thor, Frigga and Odin. Thor is not the oblivious fool, but a person with his own faults but someone who nonetheless knows Loki, loves him, and while of course limited to how own perspective, has some understanding of what's going on and what has happened to his brother. Odin was portrayed more critically, but ultimately it's as Hela said: Odin is a father like any other, one who means well but makes mistakes. I suppose with him being King and basically ruler of the universe his mistakes are just bound to be a bit bigger than others'. And Frigga was just like what I think when I think of the word 'mother'. Supporting, loving, caring, but also a person of authority. Loki is her son, her child, and I found their relationship beautiful. Though I can't quite understand how Loki could hold the secret of his origins so much against Odin while seemingly ignoring that Frigga had known as well and therefore helped keep that secret. But then, feelings and emotions are seldom rational...
Anyway. Loved the story! It'll definitely go on my favourites list.