Reviews for With My Heart Ticking
Angleico3156789 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Interesting beginning. You've managed to catch the dynamic between them spot on. I'm intrigued to see how their 'date' goes.
jenny crum chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Awesome start and I can't wait for more, I sooooo love Derek and Pen together, please update soon
Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This is a really wonderful start. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
dellaslovinlife chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I'm loving the start of this! Can't wait to read more :)
Claire Randall Fraser chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
This is a great start. Please update soon.
Kimd33 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I like them together too.
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I enjoyed chapter one. Looking forward to reading more.
kmn1829 chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I loved it! It was a great first chapter and I need to read more! Please please PLEASEEEEEEEEEE update soon!