|Reviews for Captured by Pitch|
| Guest chapter 28 . 1/5
I love the story when is the next update ~
| acetwolf94 chapter 28 . 1/2
ADD MORE PLEASE!
| Guest chapter 28 . 11/9/2016
Wow, first time I've read this and it's amazing! Extremely sadistic, but very detailed and emotional! Please tell me this isn't it, there must be more to come! I'm totally hooked and don't want it to end there!
| Guest chapter 28 . 11/5/2016
Where did you go this was so amazing I loved every minute of reading it and then you left me you just left
I'm re reading this
And l do it
Again and again
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
this is beautiful omg 3
| HopeFrostRunnerDragonFire chapter 28 . 9/27/2016
Ahhhh! I remember reading this story years ago and it was so good, I don't suppose you ever plan on updating? (that wasn't a dig or anything, just hoping you will, im hooked!)
| Seiun - Galaxy Dragon chapter 28 . 9/21/2016
Pls Update soon! I LOVEEE this story!
| Skimaskmaster chapter 8 . 8/27/2016
Okay, I remember three years ago when I read this fic in its entirety and now I'm re-reading it and all I gotta say is that Edgelord420 is in the house. It's not bad per-se it's that my repertoire has grown and it's interesting to see how your writing has grown since you've written this. Btw this fic is bleak af and it's not a bad thing it's just very very bleak and sort of raises a couple of questions about pain and blood when it comes to spirits and such. Pretty cool tho i gotta say
| Littwink chapter 13 . 8/15/2016
Pitch sounds desperate with Jamie.
| Zucchini999 chapter 28 . 8/14/2016
OMG! This is so good! When are you going to update? I WANT MORE OF THIS STORY! Please update!
| guest chapter 28 . 8/12/2016
This is amazing! Please update!
| kairi loves sora chapter 28 . 7/27/2016
Yes! Tooth is awake that is a really good sign. I thought that Sandy was with them in the room where did he go? In fact didn't all of the guardians end up in there. Tooth really needs to calm Jack down and tell him that it isn't his fault. Doesn't North have some stronger pain killers that he can give Jack? I hate seeing him in that much pain. Love that Baby tooth wanted to stay with him. That is so cute. I'm surprised he didn't see his staff there. I really hope Jamie gets their attention soon. I think he really will help Jack even if Jack doesn't want to see him. So what are the marks on his back doing to his dreams? Did the knife put black nightmare sand into the wound? That is the only thing that I can think of. Well looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/11/2016
Please update soon!
It's so good!
| Cherrycola chapter 28 . 3/27/2016
PLEASE. YOU. MUST. UPDATE.
I love how much detail you put into this story. Even if some of them are dark or bloody, it's easy for me to understand why they're there. I just started at chapter one and made it all the way to the last one, I just couldn't stop reading! That's what I look for in a book, where the story is so fantastic that you just want to hear more.
Just so you know, this is the longest review I have ever written. I really, really, really, hope that you continue to keep writing.
P.S. If you don't finish the story, I think a piece (all) of my soul might die.
Ha! Try to live with that on your conscience! :)
| Just-another-fan chapter 28 . 1/27/2016
Omg please please PLEASE continue to update! I got so into this entire fanfic and was so sad when it just stopped! You're writing is amazing!