Reviews for Breath of Life
Maffalda chapter 22 . 9/22
It is so unfortunate that a writer of great talent like yours with this story so exciting, astonishing even, and so well structured does not finish his stories. It's sad.
fallingyuki chapter 22 . 9/14
Whoa. Massive cliffhanger. I know you haven't touched this in so long but I hope you still feel like writing more. I also liked your recommendations the first few chapters. I'm going to check them out now
Asia126 chapter 22 . 7/15
please update
LittleWolf1991 chapter 22 . 7/11
you are the devil for leaving us with a cliffhanger.
tamwhit chapter 22 . 3/26
Please update your story
QSWhidbee2010 chapter 22 . 2/26
Pretty, pretty Please update soon! I absolutely love this Paul and Bella story. So I'm hoping you'll find the time or your muse and be able to finish it. Can't wait to find out if Bella and Makala are alright, if she's pregnant,if she will find out about the wolves, and how her and Paul's relationship will progress. Looking forward to reading more *hint**hint* :D
Thanks
Q
jahkarahlyoung chapter 22 . 12/3/2016
Are you freaking kidding me!. Why this is the worst time to stop writing.
ninibella chapter 22 . 7/13/2016
tu reprend ta fiction quand merci
The 5 of Spades chapter 4 . 6/29/2016
I usually hate it when Bella's a brat, but the fact that she's aware of her brattiness and it's not actually inherent is highly amusing to me.
The 5 of Spades chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
Wow. The chasm thing hit home.
The Griffindor Hatstall chapter 22 . 6/10/2016
omg plz plz plz update
In Love With Paul-Seth-Jasper chapter 22 . 5/22/2016
Omg! I need more pleasseeeeeee...

I can't believe you left it off like that... I hope there okay.. please write more soon..
GoddessxNyte2 chapter 22 . 4/27/2016
why...why would you stop there?! pls pls pls update again soon. i've read this whole story since 8am this morning and i seriously need and want more. hoping rose and Alice don't die..also hoping Seth lives. seriously need to know everything turns out alright. going crazy not knowing what happens next.
Olivia Williams chapter 22 . 12/27/2015
I wish you would update pretty please
ptl4ever419 chapter 9 . 12/24/2015
Wait a second if Bella is 18 then shouldn't the house be hers?
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