|Reviews for Promises|
| Alumi chapter 39 . 12/22/2013
Oh my gosh, I'm just a mess of emotions after finishing this story. Seriously, your writing is just amazing. Orion's death was just painful to read as well as Apollo's jealousy and Artemis's grief. A great story the fleshes out the myth of Artemis and Orion. I loved it!
| Angelina Roongta chapter 12 . 11/23/2013
| Angelina Roongta chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
I love the name sof the machines and your reaction was what mine would have been if I had been in your place, I mean Athena and Artemis are the best names ever. Oh and I love your story
| SoulfulGinger17 chapter 39 . 7/19/2013
Wow, this was absolutely spectacular! I truly loved this story from start to finish, and it doubles as my first Greek mythology fanfic as well!
I loved how you captured Artemis' personality, she is no doubt headstrong and fierce, but she can also be kind and loving when she needs to be. Orion was really cool, I felt for him a lot, and I wish he didn't die, even if I knew he was going to going into this story, Lastly, your portrayal of Apollo was amazing. Rather than an irredeemable bastard, you chose to make him a tragic villain who even if we can't support his actions, we can definitely see that he isn't evil.
Then, there's the romance betweenOrion and Artemis. It was so nice to see a gradual evolution over a simple head-over-heels-at-first-sight thing. It was so amazing see them every time they were together.
Not only am I going to fav this marvelous story, I'm definitely checking out your other works as well! You are such an amazing writer!
Ja ne, can't wait to read more!
| theburgerqueen chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Great Artemis and Orion story. My favorite fanfiction ever written, to be honest. I read the whole thing in about 2 days, lol. I cried when Orion died, you did a great scene there. I love it!
| BlackDreamQueen chapter 39 . 7/3/2013
I will die of dehydration because of you! I cried since you described the death of Orion ...I spent the end of your wonderful story with a handkerchief because I could not stop mourn!
Definitely, I loved your story. The sensitivity of the characters is superb realism with which you treated the facts as well.
You wrote the best version I've read about the myth of Artemis and Orion.I liked it!
Well, that's all. Not know what else to say, other than compliments.
I hope you understand the review; The English is not my native language I had to use google translator to comment.
Take care and keep writing! You're doing great.
| silentwolf111 chapter 39 . 5/24/2013
Whoa. This has got to be one of the BEST fanfictions I've ever read! Seriously, you have no idea how hard it was for me to just stop reading. :) Love it!
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/20/2013
I just finished ch. 7 and I don't know about anybody else but I totally have Orlando Bloom and Olivia Wilde in my head for Artimis and Apollo. And for Orion I see Chris Hemsworth.. not Liam. Haha but it's good to know I was close!
| BeautifulArtemis chapter 39 . 5/17/2013
So many tears! I cried so many times reading this! I was kind of happy when Artemis slapped Apollo but i also felt so bad for him. I admit, some of the tears I shed were for him... This was definitely one of my all-time favourites! It had love, angst, romance, and just nice companionship. The gift exchange thing was wonderful and I can never get over how well you describe both Artemis and Orion. You make Orion so handsome and courteous and Artemis so brave and strong... and loving.
Plus I think you picked the best eye-colour for Artemis! Midnight blue... so enchanting and exotic.
| Theisaryz Eufuelle chapter 37 . 5/15/2013
I...It's so touching. You know I read this while listening to "I've Dreamed of You" by Barbra Streisand and everything just came to life...! It just fits them, this scene, this chapter, this whole drama!
| Theisaryz Eufuelle chapter 17 . 5/13/2013
That's some loquacious sleep talking you got there. Though it is true that some people reply if you ask them things while they're sleep talking but this...? he must be awake! (Because I've tried talking to a sleeping person and they do not reply coherently!). But as a plot device, I must say it's quite clever.
| Silverandthesea chapter 23 . 5/6/2013
If my brother was as possessive over me as Apollo I would slap him in the face for thinking he had ownership over me.
| Guest chapter 39 . 4/5/2013
You made me cry like a baby, these last couple chapters! Such a great story!
| Thehuntress chapter 19 . 3/31/2013
I FREAKING LOVE YOU!
Lady Artemis is my favorite goddess,
As well as Lord Hades and Lady Persephone being my favorite couple! I love how you portray Lady Artemis to be kind, a turn around from most other things I have read about her. People also make out as though Lord Hades was cruel to Lady Persephone. I mean, they fell in love!
Anyway to the review.
You have a gift for writing and have amazing ideas. I have read this story three times now and I still get teary-eyedevery time I read it.
| Guest chapter 39 . 3/28/2013
You are an AMAZING author. You portray Artemis and Orion amazingly, in my opinion! It was such a touching, tragic story. I started crying! Keep writing!