|Reviews for Demon's Light|
| MaryJ.Fox chapter 15 . 3/10
Hurry up and update pleaseeeeee.
| Butterfree chapter 21 . 3/5
- ""You'd probably win anyway Uvo, so there's point" He shooed him away" You left out a 'no'
- "He knew he should have brought more money, but he thought what he had enough." I think the 'what' should be a 'that'
Oranges! Leora should throw watermelons instead. Oranges are too expensive. Oh, a magical gun is good too!
WAIT. WHAT? I WANT TO READ THIS BLACK MAGIC ARTICLE FROM THE DEMON DIMENSION!
Indirect Kiss get! Oh gosh, I love your fem Killua so much.
Anyway, sorry for the random beginning to the review. I only spotted two small errors and you know I can't resist making facebook style comments. Very, very good chapter. The introduction of Bisuke was done in a way that was so in character for her; veiled in mystery yet annoyance at the same time. Leora would be an awesome drug dealer and I loved how you gave her a chapter for herself. Plus, she has a weapon now! That is supremly awesome.
Good luck writing!
| Ugo-kun chapter 21 . 3/5
This chapter was hilarious! I want a orange as my shield! XD
| HXH chapter 21 . 3/3
I love your imagination! This story is like the best out of all the others i read. Keep up the good work and i hope this story becomes famous!
| Nispedana chapter 21 . 3/2
Ahahaha. So cute how the two main girls suck at cooking xD
And hahaha Biscuit on Crack? I'm not surprised if she /was/ LOL
AND hahaha. Funny how Leora was like an older brother to his little sister Gon. Approving Killua like that. *cackles*
And Pietro? Kurapika doesn't like him?
Ohhhhh *wiggles eyebrows*
| MaryJ.Fox chapter 1 . 2/26
the moment i saw the update was when i was in class and i fangirl squealed waaaay too loud..
| Retz chapter 21 . 2/26
i am internally panicking and must type fast before i fangirl and break my laptop so AWESOME!
| Yuki Candy Heart chapter 21 . 2/25
Oh, this was such a cute chapter! Poor Palm though... But then again... Oh well, this was an awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one!
| Ugo-kun chapter 20 . 2/12
Eeeeee that make out scene was just amazing! I squealed so hard! More!
| Retz chapter 20 . 2/10
Every word I read I squelled it's so...KAWAII! To me at least so awesome and I agree red looks better than gray and CONTINUE! Bye.
| Flame Metal Saphire chapter 20 . 2/10
I really like the part where Gon asked Killua if he could take off his shirt XD Please continue this story I love it!
| Nispedana chapter 20 . 2/9
Darnit! I was so sure I submitted this review. xD
Anyway, THIS WAS SUCH FUN!It's a little filler-y but who am I to complain?! I liked this chap! I liked it very much.
And CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR 20TH CHAPTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEER! *hugs*
| MaryJ.Fox chapter 20 . 2/9
I love long chapters so ya better keep makin em. And Dawww fluffff...more kurapika and Killian jealousy! Its cute when they get overprotective ...well I can't be anymore happier then when I saw this was updated xD cnt wait for next update, don't make more then a week pweasssse I need meh readz
| Butterfree chapter 20 . 2/9
Whenevr I reach a milestone I buy myself some pizza and reread a doujin.
I wish I had a friend I could call Pie! oDo
Pfft, oh my go-I can't believe you seriously took that script we did so long ago and implemented it here. Weeelll, at least Zeno and Silva weren't doing anything weird otherwise that would have turned out a lot more extreme. Kurapika being the one to save them in the end was perfect.
"It's Kurapika's clothes right? He'll just be like a girl and sew it back up himself." That line was perfect.
"Oh my god, why didn't you guys call me over?! I want to see food attacking people!" I can totally imagine this. Kurapika's the only responsible adult XD
Great chapter! I guess this chapter was more for fun than actual plot development, but you still managed to make it so much fun to read. The part when they were making out made me awkwardly shriek too. Oh god, I shall accept the challenge of making Gon smart and have it work!
| MaryJ.Fox chapter 19 . 1/30
Yaaay another awesome story..can't wait for you to update...pweaseeeeeee update faster...anyway I want. Ore fluffiness from gon n killua...maybe a make out scene? For what it means I really love the plot and point of this story...I never thought someone could incorporate so much of the original into something mythical in a way... I'd love to see some werewolves...pweaseeeeeee