Reviews for Fallen
Shannon A. Bernstein chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Hey, this is a decent little oneshot here! I definitely see Gilbert as being the type who can't ever be completely independent, so I agree with you as far as the whole staying with Ludwig and Feliciano thing. And yay GerIta is my other OTP (next to PruAus) so I'm always glad to see GerIta references in PruAus fics!

Also, I liked how Gilbert asked that question. ["Would you like to be awesome with me?"] definitely sounds like something he'd say.

Only thing is, I'm not sure the following line made any sense:
["If you must be cunning to never have any problems, then-"]
Maybe I'm just being stupid, but I wasn't sure exactly what Roderich was trying to say here.