Reviews for Fred, Angelina, and Love Potions
Lady Mage chapter 9 . 7/27/2005
love this
Lady Mage chapter 8 . 7/27/2005
yipee, yipee, yipee yi yay
Lady Mage chapter 7 . 7/27/2005
man
Lady Mage chapter 6 . 7/27/2005
love potions are at work...
Lady Mage chapter 5 . 7/27/2005
man!
Lady Mage chapter 4 . 7/27/2005
oh yeah is right! go fred and angelina!
Lady Mage chapter 3 . 7/27/2005
yippee!
Lady Mage chapter 2 . 7/27/2005
yay
Lady Mage chapter 1 . 7/27/2005
lol
GryffindorB chapter 9 . 7/21/2003
This is probably one of the best Fred/Angelina stories I have read. I LOVE IT! Really ideal for F/A fans.
Yolei chapter 9 . 6/3/2003
AW! Such a cute ending! i just wanted to let you know that Fred and Angelina ARE in the same year. Really Good Fic!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/24/2002
good
Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2002
nice

but fred doesn't seem to be the shy type
Mena In The Garden chapter 6 . 9/20/2002
Ack! Poor Fred! That's so wrong.
Mena In The Garden chapter 4 . 9/20/2002
That was a super short chapter! A couple of things: again, they kiss too soon. You're rushing the story on too fast. Slow down, enjoy the ride more. Build the tension. Another thing is you used the "word" "Alright". That's not actually a word. It needs to be "all right" - it's always two separate words. "Alright" is used a lot but it's incorrect, just so you know! Final note which was actually extremely funny even though I'm sure you didnt mean it to be: When Madam Hooch starts the game you have her actually screaming BLEEEEP! Your Bleep sound is inside your quote marks, which means she actually says it. That was hysterical, I could just see her out there yelling, BLEEEEP! Just put the sound outside the quotes and you're good to go.

"Now I want a nice, clean game. On my whistle, BEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPP!"
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