|Reviews for A balance between love and love|
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/3/2015
Poorly developed plot and unbelievable character dialogue. The story jumps from scene to scene at a neck breaking pace. Take the time to develop your plot and characters. Don't try to wrap up so many storylines in one chapter.
| Kagura18 chapter 8 . 6/22/2013
very confusing story...
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/9/2012
So did Maura marry Ian or was it a dream?
| Dark1ns chapter 8 . 10/9/2012
I suggest you get a beta reader because there are a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes in this fic. Skipping 4 years and then saying it is a dream was very confusing.
| Maywemeetagainclexa chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
loved it xx
| Nat chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
U really should get a beta. There are so many obvious mistakes in ur story that i stopped after the first chapter. 'putted and founded' doesnt excist and why would u use the past tense when its obviously the present one. Was a good start but really get a beta.
| Bambibelle84 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
OK now I'm curious as why would Maura ever speak to the awesume . I really loved Jane's note so adorable. Curious to read more.
| Maywemeetagainclexa chapter 7 . 9/24/2012
| Jo chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
I like a many other people am totally confused-how if Maura is married to Ian can she marry Jane? and now Maura has been hit by a car?
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
Your story planning and your grammar are terrible. Please scrap this story and start again but this time with a beta and talent. You used words like "putted down". Really? It's "put done". Seriously I didn't even try to finish this story because it was so badly written!
| Red chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
So maura is married to ian?!
| android chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
55 chaps? so if she is married to Ian why is she going to propose to her? I understand why she married Ian just don't like the reason why?and Ian daughter is from some woman he knocked up in Africa or wherever he goes is she dead? so is maura going to be in a coma to? is there going to be like some 7th heaven thing they just floating around lol or Like some saving hope thing? anyways I await the next chapter.
| anon chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
Not bad, but check the grammar!
| PariseAnne chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
Confusing... First the grammar is awful and the story develops too quickly it makes it very hard to follow.
The plot is good, it's just the way it is developped...
| charmedjedi chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
First of all poor Jane four years in a coma how horrible. I am a little confused so I ave a few questions. So Jane is in her coma and Maura is raising Ian kid and was wants mary Jane right? But if she still in a coma how is that going to work?