Reviews for Favour
warzonecall chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
Wow quiet the catch here, it was romantic and quiet kinky in my point of view. You should make more of this 'cause it just so good.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
Awww
Linc chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Love it
liladh chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
SO GOOD
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Nice! Love it how they both just love each other! 3 Man, great work!
OvariesOfTime chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Interesting. I could see this as a little prequel of sorts for a several-chappy long fanfic about them having a kid. But that could just be me and my ever-baby obsessed mind. Anywhooo. I liked it. I noticed a typo, though, in the first paragraph.

"Bliss continued to massage him mind and soul, and never had the male felt more at peace."

Now, this could go one of two ways. It could read "Bliss continued to massage his mind and soul..." or "Bliss continued to massage him, mind and soul..." The way you had "him" written in there originally was just odd, and I wasn't sure which way you meant, since both could work, and it's such a small mistake. East fix, no big deal.

Other than that, I found nothing wrong with it. Keep writing! You have a talent!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Haha I liked it :)