Reviews for Destiny
Tsaukpaetra chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Good plot development. The patience scene felt very fast for what it represented. There were a few missing letters here and there, but overall it was good.
Keep going! ;)
Tsaukpaetra chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Wait, did Kamiko claim to be Naruto's brother, and that only happened after they've been in training for five years? Not to mention the adults and other children would have caught on kinda quick. Here I'm only assuming that it is as a gesture of unofficial adoption.
Also, I find it kinda funny that apparently Kamiko means "Little Goddess" (That's right, female ;) ). With that out of the way, grammar and spelling is fair, you had a few awkward sentences here and there, but nothing major.
Keep going! ;)