|Reviews for Nightwind School of Magic|
| mollsballs chapter 16 . 1/17
Sorry, but I took off the alert for your story. I was interested at the beginning, but you strayed so far from the beginning plot that I don't understand what's going on. The original characters aren't even in the story anymore except for a few mentions. I took this to be a story about the marauders and Lily, but in a different school, but you totally changed the characters almost on the spot to be all OCs.
| Lady Elizabeth of New York chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
I'm going to assume that there will be conflict later. Right now it seems like everything is too good to be true. I realize this probably sounds like I'm being very nitpicky, but all stories need a little bit of conflict.
But I'm warming up to this school and I'll keep reading.
| Lady Elizabeth of New York chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
"If you show signs of being evil with little or no chance of being redeemed, your invitation to the school is rescinded.
Wow. Just wow. Every time I see that sentence, I'm shocked and quite frankly outraged and repulsed. They are only eleven years old for heavens sake. Plus Pettigrew didn't show signs of turning against his friends until he was out of Hogwarts.
I find it very cynical of you that you think that ELEVEN years olds should be blamed for something they haven't even done yet,
I don't think you even get J. K. Rowlings books and/or characters.
I'm sorry for being so harsh but I seriously think you are way off on the selection process of this school/
| Phoniex Fire Pixie chapter 14 . 6/28/2013
Oh I love this story please can't wait for more .
| eveningstars chapter 13 . 5/2/2013
It's great to see from the other kids POV (Amina is my new fave character!)
| mollsballs chapter 12 . 4/18/2013
This story is really good. I enjoy the different cultures and the different setting. Also, I'm getting a little history and language lesson :D keep the story up! And I'm hoping there's a sequel... One with Harry attending possibly?
| blueragingfire chapter 11 . 4/9/2013
wow! i like all the misunderstood characters going to Nightwind. I always forget abour regulus because he wasn't really a big part in the series. Do you think the Blacks would try to get their sons back or even bribery to get them to visit?
| eveningstars chapter 11 . 4/6/2013
It's great that Reg is going to be attending Nightwind with his brother. Update soon :)
| paigemeable chapter 10 . 4/2/2013
I love your story! It's very original, I've never read anything about another school before. Congrats in being an original! You wouldn't believe how I stumbled on to this story, but I just have to say, good job!
| eveningstars chapter 10 . 3/31/2013
Ooh, I totally love the whole journal concept! I wish I was apart of the Phoenix Club :)
| Luiz4200 chapter 9 . 3/28/2013
I think Dumbledore saw through Tom's lies but decided to give him a chance anyway.
| Forbular chapter 8 . 3/20/2013
I do like this fic & the premace for it, it really interesting how youve intertwined so many aspects and still kept the plot flowing
I do wonder how your going to continue this though because it feels like were due an argument/ fight or some sense of outside danger? I know there in first year but it just feels like there due some difficultys since im creatin nightwind a lot of the grittiness in the characters has been removed.
Also are lily and james going to have a love hate relationship like we see in the books? Id be interested to see some character development (we see a lot of the group as a whole but it doesnt feel like weve got to know them all well yet, most of them feel like almost minor characters, so mybe some more dialogue to build up distinct personalitys?)
As i say i really enjoy this fic & i hope this receiw is usefull
Looking forward to the next :) xxx
| eveningstars chapter 8 . 3/19/2013
Yay! You updated :)) awesome chapter, I loved the quidditch match
| BlueRagingFire chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
nice! i liked this chapter. But you didn't mention anything about the costumes. This is a cool story. Forgot what i wanted to say, but keep writing!
| Luiz4200 chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
The information on Hallowmas and Samhain was taken from Wikipedia, so it should be accurate.
And pigs can fly.
Nice touch with Narcissa. Do Nightwind and Hogwarts play against each other? It'd be interesting.