Reviews for Imperfect Cherry Blossom
kinigget chapter 25 . 12/14/2015
Good stuff.
So are you going to adapt PoFV or skip straight to MoF?
kinigget chapter 15 . 12/11/2015
Having fun leaning on the fourth wall?
kinigget chapter 10 . 12/9/2015
...oh you clever little bastard.

I see what you did there
Ghost Man chapter 25 . 11/17/2015
Just finished up this chapter after reading EVERYTHING. That was a workout. Rather enjoy the development and introduction to Tohou through your writing.

*kicks a rock* I wanna Marisa-chan too...and a Chensaw. BwahahahahaHAHAHA!
Katarina chapter 25 . 9/29/2015
Just an idea I came up with. Yes, it's inspired by a certain Lucina...

-Sol- [A]

Component resists timing out - is self-powering. Will take down -Luna- [C] with it, though.
Charging singularity attack. Singularity point functions as a turret, sending radial barrage spreads out.
Turret point also functions as 4-way laser spam. Uses reverse-polarity shields while lasers are in effect.

-Luna- [C]

Reliant on -Sol- [A] if used in conjunction. Draws power directly from Sol.
Timeout 30s
Double familiar copies of Sol, with much-slower and much-less-common shots. Combines with circular homing shots.

-Astra- [B]

5s burst split trail ricochet familiar. Design has striking similarities to a certain "Peerless Wind God".



Restricted use, special ability.



-Aether- is a combination of -Sol- [A], -Luna- [C], and -Astra- [B]. Combining these particular patterns contains significant hazard.



"Aether" is a signature strike, using a de-analytic formula to negate past training against Aether, without using a past version of a captured Aether. As such, this is a restricted ability.
Aether is a combination of Sol, Luna, and Astra in a way so that Luna and Astra both reflect off of Sol.
Occasionally, Aether will misfire and convert to Anathema, a variant of Aether. This can potentially result in self-destruction of a large radius. As a result, portals are strongly recommended for the analysis of Anathema.
Guest chapter 19 . 8/27/2015
This story is a Gem among trash and please! Don't give WiLL Be cured of ur problem if u put your mind on it! Strong human can do the impossible!
New Universe Returns chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Pretty good story. So what's the next arc after Imperishable Night?

I was wondering Maribel Hearn and Renko Usami will show up soon, meeting Kyon back in his hometown? And which Touhou game where Sanae, Kanako and Suwako will show up?
New Universe Returns chapter 20 . 8/23/2015
I was wondering when Ruukuto will show up.
Soban Tetsuo chapter 25 . 8/20/2015
"How's it feel to know your father didn't want you?"

"How's it feel to know that luna didn't want you?"

Holy F**king Shit that comeback 0_0

Probably my favorite portrayal of Mokou I've seen
neogoki chapter 25 . 8/19/2015
and now we are all reminded that Yukari is friggin Scary and scarily smart, but still can fail
Reimu may have lost soe donations but she kept herself being played, that has to count for something
good job on Kagura's plan, wonder how much of her acts were "acting" and what was real. Will she now have a lack of Mokou-Tan and turn towards the internet? NEET BANZAI!
also excellent reminder that factions are not monolithic forces, which makes one worry about extremists among the SOS-Dan's associates.
jgkitarel chapter 25 . 8/19/2015
Interesting coverage of the characteristics and motivations of several Gensokyo residents there, and even being fully in line with their canon characteristics. Yes, Yukari is trying to instill fear of Youkai into the humans, yes Mokou and Kaguya hate each other with a passion, yes what Yukari pulled was also an attempt to get Reimu to get some respect by the humans, et cetera.

I like that you are giving another faction with the SCD here, while poking a hole in the fandom belief that the Data Society are the good guys, which doesn't quite mesh with Kyon's own history with them. Yes, he's more hostile to the SCD, but that doesn't mean he's friendly with the Data Society, either.
GreyMan19 chapter 25 . 8/19/2015
That must be an interesting feeling carrying around Ryoko in your pocket, kind up there with a extreme yandere girlfriend.
Delta7667 chapter 24 . 8/3/2015
This story is really great, hope you update this story since I reread this 5 time.
Otaku97 chapter 24 . 7/12/2015
Superb story!
I really love it
I love it so much
Please update soon!
Anime-master1000 chapter 13 . 1/4/2015
This story brought me to tears at the end of the blossom incident. ( Which not many storys did this much feelings towards me. )
But damn it Marisa why did you do that to poor Kyon?
All these characters from Touhou is exactly what I imagined them to be.
Now time to read the secual now.
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