|Reviews for Everybody's Fool|
| IvyAddams chapter 13 . 6/9/2014
I love your story! So much fun to read! Keep going!
| tvobessedWHAT chapter 13 . 9/26/2013
Love it, I keeped thinking Angie is going to find out, but how? It was prefect. Can't wait to see what happens next. There is going to be a big fight between Barnabas and Angie. Cant wait for him to fight for hisz love for Elizabeth.
| linalove chapter 13 . 9/26/2013
:o...Not the witch!
xxx Lina :D
| linalove chapter 12 . 7/23/2013
Loved it! Hehehe, poor Julia...Lol
| Sebastian Shuu chapter 12 . 7/21/2013
Bwahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahhahahahahah this chapter was hilarious! ! XD
| tvobessedWHAT chapter 12 . 7/21/2013
I thought Angelic would find out, but Julia, brillant. love it. What Julia going to do with this information. Cant wait for the next chapter, hope it's up soon.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
This is wonderful story, and you're doing a great job with it! I do have some major turn offs though with this. First of all, Elizabeth; even if she's distant, is his FAMILY. Sorry for all caps, but it does disgust me. Mainly though, because they could possibly be very distant, is that Liz is the age of his mother! Not now of course, but they would honestly be about the same age since people had kids earlier then. An I that weird that I don't think different generations should hookup? Sorry if that came out rude, because this is a great story and fabulous writing. I'm just thinking realistically here.
This is AngeliqueBouchard1972
| linalove chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Woohoo! Loved it! Great chapter!
More soon, please?
xxx Lina :D
| tvobessedWHAT chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
great chapter, love the fluff. I was thinking where's Angelique? What if angelique finds out about them, we all know how possessive she is of him and how jealous she is of the women that are with him.
| Sebastian Shuu chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/22/2013
Just read the whole story, loved it! I want to know what happens next now. I hope to see an update soon :)
| Tinkerbell chapter 10 . 6/16/2013
I love how Julia is suspicious, I would love if she was walking on them, after all that happened for Liz. What goes around comes around...
| Tinkerbell chapter 9 . 6/15/2013
OMG, that was so great! They're so cute. I love how much he cares for her.
| tvobessedWHAT chapter 10 . 6/15/2013
this is so good. WHY did u end the chapter like that, I want more. Please have the next Chapter up soon! Please, Please, Please! Thanks
| linalove chapter 10 . 6/15/2013
Yay! An early update! Loved it!
I hope for more soon!
xxx Lina :D