Reviews for The Fuiunjutsu Master of Konoha
my 2 guys chapter 9 . 7/14
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 7/13
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 7/11
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 7/10
that was good keep the chapters coming
arinasution5 chapter 7 . 6/30
marquis.shax chapter 8 . 6/7
woulda been a better lemon had you written more of the girl on girl stuff lol
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 6/7
I know this story was abandoned almost 3 years ago so I'm more so just reading it out of boredom but seriously you've really screwed the pooch on your plot. First Naruto helps Itachi eliminate all the traitors in his clan who were planning a coup and now you've got Itachi in Akatsuki, Danzo with multiple sharingan and acting as if Sasuke is the only Uchiha left in Konoha when in a previous chapter as stated Itachi an Naruto only killed the traitors with Mikoto and a bunch of others still left alive
neilru2 chapter 8 . 4/11
You have an interesting story, but your not a good story teller, thank you for the entertainment
sirmikeshark chapter 13 . 2/28
this is good but will there be more?
Spidey2 chapter 13 . 12/27/2015
Love it! Keep going!
Drake Darkvenom chapter 7 . 11/27/2015
Never mind the last review I posted. Plot twists make my head hurt which doesn't allow me to think perfectly straight at times.
DrakeDarkvenom chapter 6 . 11/27/2015
I like the story but this chapter tore open a few plot holes. First you stated a couple of chapters ago that Naruto already new the rasengan and was working on adding an element to it. This chapter has jiraiya teaching him the rasengan from step one. Second Naruto and Itachi have already met each other back during the massacure which brings the next hole into question. It was labeled an assassination attempt by outside forces to weaken the clan which allowed Itachi stay in the village, so why is he traveling with Fishface McSushi for the akatsuki now.
Puppet Priestess chapter 10 . 11/18/2015
I have to say you are a great author if you can keep the plot while having a large harem.
Puppet Priestess chapter 9 . 11/18/2015
You are amazing at writing lemon scenes. Do u mind if I use these in one of my fanfics while changing the names?
Puppet Priestess chapter 13 . 10/13/2015
Please update soon. If you aren't going to, then abandon this story, but leave it keep it online cause it's amazing.
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