Reviews for Nick's mistake Billy's girl
Vintage Apocalypse chapter 3 . 1/23/2013
Cool story :)
a chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
no moree! dont end this please!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Hello Dear
happy day for you, it is my pleasure to write you after viewing your profile on which really having communication with you, I'll be grateful if you could write back to me direct email address, so that i can be able to tell you everything about me, and my pictures,( gloryyak31 ) have a nice day, do not forget to write direct to my private Email
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Hello Dear
happy day for you, it is my pleasure to write you after viewing your profile on which really having communication with you, I'll be grateful if you could write back to me direct email address, so that i can be able to tell you everything about me, and my pictures,( gloryyak31 yaho/o/.c/om) have a nice day, do not forget to write direct to my private Email
Glory gloryyak31
julliet15 chapter 3 . 9/24/2012
The plot thickens... and I'm left wanting more Billy&Jane! But if you're going through a rough patch updating FanFiction is the last thing you should be stressing about. Just saying. God bless!
Kenzi.got.love chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I love it! I love the Billy and Jane-ness of this chapter.. it's so them and I can totally picture them sitting at lunch talking like this or something. Just a word of advice, while writing you should create the setting (ie where the situation is taking place) incorporate what the narrator sees and feels because it adds a personal touch. If you set up the background then it's easier for the readers to imagine what's going on and things like that.. I hope that helped you :) Please continue!
Hellookitty2010 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Aew this is really good! Keep updating ! :) i hope billy and jane end up together in this story ;)