|Reviews for Diary Of An Unwind, Domaxus Asterland|
| ageofthedumort chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
I think this could be a really good story if you continued it! Maybe you could add a little visual detail, though? I don't know, and I'm in no position to judge, I'm only on my third story XD
| ghostsil chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
It's so wonderfully amusing! Who would have thought to have an albino unwind? I don't really have anything to criticize haha. I just wondered why you said pink eyes, I thought their eyes are gray due to lack of pigment? Don't mind me and my nerd comments. Awesome job!