Reviews for Lucian Fanfic You Hold Me Together
layla chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
i wanna know what happens next
florencebisson chapter 3 . 10/26/2012
b-26, YOU KILLED ME MAYA. OKAY. yeah, this chapter was sooooo adorable! at the pier omg so cuuuute. and the Edward-like compliment about how beautiful she was: GAAAWWWSH. dead. :)
WWKMDbracelets chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
Great chapter. Can't wait for what is next. Update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
It's so go
guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
nice chapter! how long will it be? i love it :)
HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
Great chapter!
A Pretty Little Love chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
oh i really like it! can't wait for more... it better have a happy lucian ending :p
WWKMDbracelets chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Oh Snap. What's gonna happen now. And who even let Chris in!? Hahaha. Update soon!
florencebisson chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
OOOOOH HUN! This is tooo cute! Chris better BACK THE HELL OFF or my fist will meet his face! (Jk, I get really frustrated when I read Fanfics, BAHA!) great chapter, the seperation of paragraphs was great too! Keep it up :DD
WWKMDbracelets chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
Great chapter. I'm excited to see what happens next. Update soon!
Kaitlin chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
I love it! But im not interested in reading it anymore if you keep your right like this. Please make more paragraphs then having it bundled up and Please have like seperate lines when people talk
This is proper English:
"Hey, Whats up?"Ian Asked
"Nothing Much!" I replied back
RAther than something like this:
"Hey Whats up?" Ian Asked. "Nothing much." I replied back.
IT just gets TOOO confusing! Other wise its a great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Second part!
HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Great chapter!