|Reviews for Draco's pride|
| Macceh chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I really like this! A sensitive look at Draco's view of the war and the way he explained it to his son was lovely, really in character for how I'd imagine an older Draco to be!
Just a few typos here and there but I think other reviewers have picked up on most of them so I won't list them.
Thank you very much for taking part in my challenge I really enjoyed reading your entry!
| SereneMayhem chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
This is really good. I enjoyed it :)
| extremehpfan chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Good story. Just so you know, near the bottom, you have "mugblood." I assume you mean mudblood or muggle born. Still a grear story.
| Arpad Hrunta chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Good story! I really like how you portrayed Draco's change, and his realizations regarding his past behaviour. It was a nice moment with him and his son. I really am not a fan of Hogwarts-era Draco, but I quite like a remorseful adult portrayal of him.
Only a few typos: it should probably be 'forgiven' instead of 'forgotten' in the fifth paragraph. 'Keen' instead of 'keened' in the third paragraph. In the seventh-last paragraph it should probably be 'fell from grace' rather than 'fell out of grace', and 'contrary' rather than 'contraire'.
But these are minor. This was really well done, and an enjoyable read!