Reviews for A Physical Pain
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21
once again, god DAMN i got the feels hard in this chapter...
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21
Guest chapter 1 . 4/21
aw... QAQ
zenaku8yoru chapter 7 . 4/15
OH MY GOD HAHAHA! XD Update again soon plz!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/2/2014
Ah please make another fic like this! This one was amazing I love the helpless torture kinda feel to it. The whole idea of breaking someone down is a favourite of mine in a story! Please even if it wasn't law and kid I would apreciate it if you wrote another story sorta similar to this one! But amazing work btw I loved every chapter!
Blue Stick Glow chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Wow! Thumbs up! I like your story!
ExGratia chapter 4 . 6/28/2014
Oh god, the cursive sentences at the end of this chapter went straight to my heart and turned it into a soft mess :3 Really cute! Somehow I couldn't imagine the relationship between Luffy and Ace differently! I like how clearly you can see the affection both have for each other, really nice :)
MisakiXRevive chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
MisakiXRevive chapter 5 . 3/20/2014
MisakiXRevive chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
Dun, du... Wait that doesn't fit here.
I'll just go with this:
MisakiXRevive chapter 3 . 3/20/2014
Dun, dun, dun...
MisakiXRevive chapter 2 . 3/20/2014
Dun, dun, dun!
MisakiXRevive chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Dun, dun, dun.
MisakiXRevive chapter 7 . 2/28/2014
Luffy: The only one who doesn't care about the awkward situation they're in.
Gotta love it.
Laptop Newbie chapter 5 . 2/17/2014
Well, fuck me. I found a gem in chapter 5 of this AcexLuffy fic somehow. I was googling some KidxLaw fanfiction because I was desperate for more good pieces to mull over before Oda updated us on Law's situation and thank god you delivered. I would have preferred this chapter be a separate one shot so other KiddxLaw lovers could appreciate it because it was hot and so perfect. Particular details I adored were Law's nipple piercings, the shameless (talking about you haha) position he's in, and the cock ring.

One thing I found distracting and odd was that you keep using 'Kidd' by accident when you mean 'Law.' For example, "...over Kidd's tattooed body..." and "...fingers ground deeper into Kidd's ass." I hope you see my confusion haha. Not everyday do I read a fic where its AU "modern world setting" and Kidd can still break chains with his bare hands and Law could use his "Shambles" to switch their positions during sex without even the writer noticing. I love the hint at a backstory with Law cheating on Kidd, although I feel it would probably be the other way around. If you're a fan of KiddxLaw at all, it would be lovely if you would perhaps write a prequel to this in addition to making it a separate one shot. I hope you aren't only writing this pairing because you think it would be appealing to your expected AcexLuffy readers in this fic because that sex scene was beautifully executed, albeit tiny bit lacking in creativity ( even though it IS a PWP). Thank you for letting my find this chapter :) Job extremely well done.
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