|Reviews for A Physical Pain|
| MisakiXRevive chapter 7 . 2/28
Luffy: The only one who doesn't care about the awkward situation they're in.
Gotta love it.
| Laptop Newbie chapter 5 . 2/17
Well, fuck me. I found a gem in chapter 5 of this AcexLuffy fic somehow. I was googling some KidxLaw fanfiction because I was desperate for more good pieces to mull over before Oda updated us on Law's situation and thank god you delivered. I would have preferred this chapter be a separate one shot so other KiddxLaw lovers could appreciate it because it was hot and so perfect. Particular details I adored were Law's nipple piercings, the shameless (talking about you haha) position he's in, and the cock ring.
One thing I found distracting and odd was that you keep using 'Kidd' by accident when you mean 'Law.' For example, "...over Kidd's tattooed body..." and "...fingers ground deeper into Kidd's ass." I hope you see my confusion haha. Not everyday do I read a fic where its AU "modern world setting" and Kidd can still break chains with his bare hands and Law could use his "Shambles" to switch their positions during sex without even the writer noticing. I love the hint at a backstory with Law cheating on Kidd, although I feel it would probably be the other way around. If you're a fan of KiddxLaw at all, it would be lovely if you would perhaps write a prequel to this in addition to making it a separate one shot. I hope you aren't only writing this pairing because you think it would be appealing to your expected AcexLuffy readers in this fic because that sex scene was beautifully executed, albeit tiny bit lacking in creativity ( even though it IS a PWP). Thank you for letting my find this chapter :) Job extremely well done.
| Lisette chapter 6 . 2/14
I love it but wished a little more detail and longer sex! Also, I would have comment on the rest of the chapters but was into the story and didn't want to stop and write. Hehehe. And it was soooooo worth it!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I totally agree with you about the cute, pathetic uke thing. If I wanted to read that I'd just read girlxguy. The whole point of yaoi (almost, not always) is to see 2 GUYS together.
| Melmel Phase chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
XD I had a feeling they were all at the same place. This was so great! When I say that I mean the WHOLE fic. It was yummy and sweet -hearts- I loved it! Kidd and Law, huh? Pretty hot ;3
| Melmel Phase chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
*squeals loudly* THAT WAS SO GREAT! *q* So beautifully kinky
| BlackFalcon33 chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Holy Crap! This is awesome! Law and Kidd sure had fun together! And poor Law, he almost die because he couldn't cum with that cock ring on...I wonder who that girl was (lucky her) that had sex with Law Trafalgar! 3 3 You know, Bonney would be really lucky if she gets to fuck Kidd Eutass! Which, I'm sure she does it everyday. 3
| agitowilleatyourheart chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
This is, no joke, the most perfect thing on . The pace is well mastered, the feeling properly beought out. I've never read anything so perfect. I loved it to death. Please don't end it there. The placement of characters in AU was too awesome. Please let me know if you want to continue.
| ichigi111kurosaki chapter 7 . 7/18/2013
i couldn't stop laughing!
| LostFairyMantic chapter 7 . 6/30/2013
Haha! Oh gods i love it! XD
| DinieLuvYunho chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
Lol the end of this chappie is the best.. Its sooo funny and Luffy being Luffy, the oblivious cute uke is soo adorable.. ;-) But tbh, i thought you would make seme!luffy here when you said you'd pissed with cutesy typical uke-like Luffy and i felt a bit disappointed but well the hotness AceLu sex scenes and a bit KidLaw's make up for it hihihi...
| Bijouhana chapter 7 . 3/25/2013
Omg these are my two favorite pairings in one smexy little piece! I love it soo much! I wish it was longer though, cause I really like these characters! So at first I wanted to read something with a cute Luffy and picked this one with a 'maybe it'll be what I want' and the first thing I see is the warning about no cute luffy, but a rough one XD but after the first chapter I just had to keep reading! And then BAM LawXKidd XXX and my mind was blown! Especially with this last bit where they ended up at the same hotel! Oh Ma Gorsh this story was so cute and naughty and funny and happy and full of sweet lemonade! Thanks for writing it!
| seireidoragon chapter 7 . 3/6/2013
Holy shit this was an amazing story and I love the extras! I never really thought about Law and Kidd as a pairing but it works so freaking well! Good job!
| JazMint chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Wow. I absolutely LOVED this! Yeahh Luffy isn't really the type to just lie on his back right away :PP
| lg.lg.log chapter 7 . 1/31/2013
OH MY!, i can't stop read this story over and over again! somebody needs to give your perverted mind a reward! 'cause your writing is soooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooood! you should write something about Kid x Law. Also i just love the idea of Laws nipple rings, that was just brilliant! your way of writing is really sexy, and you gave the OP characters a really lovely personality.
I had no more words to say except, that i envy your talent! you really have a big star under your name, hope you keep on writing stories as good as this one!