Reviews for Snow
jet the demigod chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
i liked this short story
it is well writen
masaki hanabusa chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
This is so cute. I love how close Vaan and Pen are :)
jet chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
i like it
it a tisst on old story
Hito me Bore chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Not a bad piece you have here. :) I'm not sure if snow would be a weather condition I would expect to see in Rabanastre, especially considering they live in the middle of the desert. It would be good if you included a bit more description along with your dialogue; the sights, smells, people, etc. just to give it a bit more depth. Other than that though, this was a cute little read!