|Reviews for Uncertainty|
| B chapter 9 . 10/5/2013
... Are you guys still there?
It'd be nice if you guys give us an author's note if you can't update anymore...
This story is amazing... It'd be shame if you guys didn't finish it...
Nonetheless, I am a bit worried since you have stated that life issues are preventing both of you from finishing it.
And it has been months since your story has been updated.
Please... ? A tiny note saying you guys are well is enough to suffice.
But I will be honest in saying that I do wish to see the next chapter... It's amazing and I really can't express my opinion on this beautiful story.
I hope you see this...
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/18/2013
This is exactly the kind of league story I love to read. This is a novel, instead of a written version of a game match: there's nary a mention of the word "ultimate".
I love a Riven/Irelia pairing, and I love the pacing in this one so far—it's enthralling. They don't even understand the depths of what they are feeling towards each other yet, and that is something many stories fail to portray. The world they live in is inspiring, too, visually engaging and realistic. Every character has been rendered through a lens of realism that adds depth to the story.
I knew from Cait's reactions by the motorcycle what she saw when she looked at Tristana and "Teemo". That right there was the hallmark of writing excellence; giving me information without telling me outright. It was a heart-wrenching moment, hitting all the emotional heartstrings.
All in all, this is an amazing start to a novel, and nothing saddens me more than seeing it lie dormant. I sincerely hope the authors will return to this story at some point in the future.
| GoG ToXiC chapter 9 . 6/26/2013
I, more than a lot of other writers on this site I would are say, am intimately familiar with capabilities of a week to turn into several months. That said, the next chapter IS still coming, right?
Because I really want to see more of this.
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/17/2013
"...and hope to have it up by the end of the week." LIARS!
I really like this story, so please, update soon
| CrimsonNoble chapter 9 . 5/15/2013
The mistake here was posting an announcement saying "YEAH WE'LL HAVE SOMETHING UP SOON" instead of just finishing stuff up to post. Now I'm all sad :(
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/30/2013
not technically a review but, meh. I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story so far, and I look forward to continuing to read your work. Thanks to the both of you for coming back.
| Dstro chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Pleeeease update guys! This is one of the most interesting stories on the net .
| Ranger cam chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Good story so fair. Had a hard time with the first bit since my all time favorite champions were dead T-T R.I.P. shyvana and lux. Keep going though
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/6/2012
This story is too awesome.
Please continue this, doesn't matter how long it takes
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/5/2012
| Insharai chapter 7 . 11/25/2012
well done, I look forward to more
| smelly cat chapter 7 . 10/30/2012
please update soon!
| Hinata0321 chapter 7 . 10/28/2012
Good stuff! This is thoughtful and brilliantly written, with the interactions between characters vibrant and believable. Occasional grammatical errors, but minor ones when they appear. Keep up the good work!
| hawk mitora chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
teemo isn't dead, he's just standing still.
but apart from that, i do like the seriousness of this story
| anonymous chapter 7 . 10/11/2012
Wow, this is an awesome story so far! I love how you guys are portraying the champions and the grim, war-torn atmosphere you're setting for Ionia and Runeterra in general. The Riven and Irelia pairing is a nice bonus too since that's probably my favorite pairing in LoL. I feel like this story has so much potential and depth and I wish you guys the best of luck in seeing this to the end!