Reviews for A Lombax's Past
destructocat chapter 9 . 6/30
come on make the series
NHGamer360 chapter 9 . 4/15/2014
I loved your fanfic! It kinda reminded me of star wars! I do hope u writer a series of this, I'd love to read some more of your work. :-)
Reyaumbra chapter 9 . 9/28/2012
:DD luving. it.
bryan mccloud chapter 9 . 9/24/2012
if nefarious is alive, she won't be able to control her anger as she most likely will want to kill him

nice chapter.
YellowDizzyLombax chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
Aww, that was an amazing ending :3
YellowDizzyLombax chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
Ooo, so she strikes them. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I thought this one was alright :)
Thomas Holmes II chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Well, the Lombax's identity was utterly unexpected, but it's still good.
Thomas Holmes II chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
I think I know who that Lombax may be. But we'll see next time.
YellowDizzyLombax chapter 4 . 9/11/2012
Hey, loving this story so far. I thought the fight scene was epic! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
YellowDizzyLombax chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Ooo, I'm liking this story so far! :D Can't wait for the next chapters!
Tina Tissue chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Great start so far. The only issue I can see is that you spelt "traitor" as "trader" but English is a bit of a tricky language like that. I hope that the next chapter comes out soon