|Reviews for Angel of Death|
| serenity-topaz chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
Despite the fact I've never played any of the games, you have a very good story here. Having a new setting meant I don't need much prerequisite knowledge of the games (although I do get the hay and tower joke) to read this fanfic, which is good. I also liked the idea of a female assassin.
All the best for the next chapter.
| Autumn Wonderland chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
This is so interesting already and I really like it, I would really love to see more of this.
| Sethera chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
This was a pretty good chapter! I've noticed that you have a tendency to skip words in your sentences though ("My was killed in the war with England, about four years ago. The battle of Agincourt,"). It's as if you had a different idea, and then replaced it with something else, and forgot to make the necessary edits. Or as if your brain was moving faster than you could type. XP
However, my pedantic nature aside, this was very good in the scope of ideas and background information. I especially liked the little spiel about the Templars, mainly because I myself don't know too much about them (however, if I'd played AC I'd probably know more). Alexiane seems a bit trusting here, telling TWO people her name (then again, I'm a bit paranoid so I'm probably not the best judge).
I can't wait to see more! :D
| Aeon Hawk chapter 3 . 9/29/2012
Lucien eh? It seems a very familiar name. Is it a coincidence that there was an assassin, Lucien Lachance in oblivion also?
Anyway, the story's building up. I like how you're introducing how Alexiane is becoming as assassin. I just hope she doesn't hurt/kill herself when climbing that tower (well it wouldn't be worth telling if she dies so early :P)
It was a very well written chapter. Looking forward to next update :)
| Lady-Night-Lark chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
I really like this. :) It is very well written and the story sounds so interesting. Please update when you can! I would very much like to read more of this!
| Aeon Hawk chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
I didn't like... I loved it! Joanne D'Arc is one of my favourite historical figures and it's so cool to see her in an AC fanfic! Great stuff! I'm looking forward to see how this turns out :D
| Sethera chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Hmm, I like it myself, despite what you called the unoriginality of the beginning. There's a reason that people use such beginnings, and that's because it works! :D
Anyways, good chapter and I like Jeanne already! :D
Actually, I've always been a big fan of Joan and pure-girl characters like her so I might be biased already. :P
| Sethera chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
Wow! Nice beginning! Kind of a somber tone here but looks good so far! :D
| Nye Terra chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
I love it!
| Evilgoodguy chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
Ah, much anticipated this story has been. It has not disappointed. Great to see a new setting for a change. Italy and Syria are getting worn a bit thin.
| Nye Terra chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
It's safe to say, I'm hooked.