jgames chapter 4 . 9/2/2014
Great to see you back. We all missed you. Can't wait to see what happens next.
the Red Omega chapter 4 . 8/18/2014
I was always wondering what happend to you, but it's grate to have you back.
Mike101 chapter 3 . 10/13/2012
Good little update. I still don't like that rabbit.
cloudsword chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
Nice ending so far, a kid of reprise instead of a cliff hanger. You are really getting good at this. Gotta mosey!
jgames chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
Very good. I'm liking this fic. You do a good job.
Mike101 chapter 2 . 9/17/2012
You do write much like cloud does. I like this story. I'll be following it from now on.
cloudsword chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
Uh oh. Now we got two sets of children lost. Though I think Mike would be able to figure it out quickly if he stopped panicking. LOL. Can't wait for more. Gotta Mosey!
cloudsword chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I don't know if I'm allowed to comment, but I'm really liking this story. The flow is great, the story is gripping and the way you portrayed my characters is perfect. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Gotta Mosey!