|Reviews for Getting Even With the Girls|
| Benjamin Lopez chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Not bad, but it was a bit redundant at some parts. For example, Teddie says "I'm so scared" and then immediately, in the same line even, the narrator repeats 'Teddie is so scared of this topic'.
And again with Teddie saying at the end "I'm feeling better because we finally got what the girls deserve for what happened at the Amagi Inn". Is it really necessary to have Teddie say that? We can suppose from the story that all of the guys feel like that.
Still, nice job. Keep on practicing your writing.
| Mac chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
I'm happy the boys finally got payback on the girls for what happened on that place.
| Jack chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Revenge is a dish best served cold, indeed.
| ClearlyOriginal chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
I laughed my ass of!HAHA!
| Yuuji Narukami chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Quite Funny. I feel bad for Yukiko though.