Reviews for Bella's red headed vampire
Sergeant Major Valkyrie chapter 1 . 5/3
I wouldn't say it's great, I will say that right off the bat. You really could have used proper punctuation. That is essential to writing of any kind, ever; always. Also, knowing the distinction between words like their, they're, and there. This is important, and so many writers seem to completely disregard it, but still expect people to like their story, or not comment on the flaws because they don't want to hear it. But that's really too bad, point blank. Excuses for bad writing are bullshit. Now, I'm not saying your writing is bad, but it could definitely use some work, especially with the things I have listed above. Thank you for your time, and happy writing.
Peter chapter 1 . 4/23
One of the best V/B 's i've read so far...
Why don't you write a few chapters more?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/13
I Need MORE!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Please update
the white wolf Haruka chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
LOVE This story ! Can't wait till next chapter! :-) :-) :-)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2015
Please continue
india-guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
Awe more
Zelda's Hero chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Please update!
poisondart18 chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
It is not crap. Why don't you write some more?
angel chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Its good you should continue the stort
wolfy193 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
I like this take on this. I think you should keep going wit it
TheViewer chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
please update soon this is really good and probably the best bella/victoria fanfiction that i have read thus far.
vamp1001 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Love the story cant wait for chapter 2
Whimsy25 chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Hmm I want More chapters. Please
Mya C chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Where's the rest of the frwaking story?!
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