|Reviews for The Unattainable Story|
| jelliclesoul635 chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
Wow, what a story! I loved everything about it, despite my two favorite characters dying of course, but that just added to all the drama and emotion. When I read that most of the tribe had been killed off, I was horrified, close to tears even! That’s how engulfed I was into the story! And when Macavity threw Munkustrap’s collar to the floor? Forget it, I was done. This story was masterfully written and honestly, I can’t remember the last time I enjoyed reading a story so much. Thanks for writing!
| jelliclesoul635 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This is such a good start to the story. It’s incredible how much I’m wrapped up into this. I can’t believe the Jellicles were so quick to get rid of Munkustrap! And then Demeter, too! Their love for each other is astounding and you’ve captured that, beautifully. You’ve also perfectly captured the manically evil Macavity, his character is so well presented. Your writing skills are superb. The dialogue is so genuine as well. Bravo.
| hi chapter 2 . 10/22/2012
This was so sad i cried so much por jem :'( Good job i liked it
| TuggersTuxedoTom chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
I can't believe they both died! I actually started crying :'(
Tugger and Jerrie are dead? NOOOOO! :'(
This was the saddest story I've ever read.
Other than that, thanks for naming me!
| raptorygirl chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
우왂 짱길다 계속 쓰실거죠?역시 님ㅠㅜ
지난번에 리뷰 감사해요 저같은 허접한 생물체한테 그런 자자자자자자잦자비를...아진짜 님사랑해요
멍커스x드미팬픽이라니 완전 잘어울리는커플링.../
멍커스 죽이거나 그러진 말,말아주소서엏
앗맞다 그리고요 저도 폴리클vs젤리클 이런구도로가는 스토리쓰고있었어서...혹시 베꼈다거나 그런 착각은 말아주세요
실제 대사"꺄악 저 징그러운거 어 어엏 으어어!치워!치워1!치워ㅓ어어!꺄아아아ㅏ앙"
| TuggersTuxedoTom chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
Oh my gosh that was sad :(
At the beginning I felt bad for Macavity but now I don't like him.
Hope Jelly will help Munkustrap and Demeter!