Reviews for Replacement
Adelheidi36 chapter 2 . 5/31
I think think would work out fine as a brotherhood fic (no pun intended) and only a pairing for Sasuske If you wish your writing is awesome you touch at the right parts and that's all that matters also for eds hes from another world I'll would think he really doesn't need a pairing
Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2014
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sierra.steinbrecher chapter 2 . 5/7/2014
PLEASE GIVE ME MORE! This is so sweet! I really want Ed to meet some of the other Rookie Nine.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/2/2014
Haha wouldn't it be funny if people thought ed was the snake dudes son cause his eyes?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/2/2014
andou-kun, we discussed the pairings already. And you seem to have gotten slower since I left. Too bad, since we had had this story partially planned out. Remember?

thee-cats-meow chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
im shipping Ed and Hinata if you havent given up on the story yet ...
Lunas13 chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Sorry it seems the link didn't post all the way.
Lunas13 chapter 2 . 9/23/2013
Maybe you could do an Ed x Ino. The reason I say that is because she looks somewhat similar to Winry and he could have a soft spot due to that. Or not an Ed x Ino. But maybe point out that they look somewhat similar. And I vote for NaruHina! I love that pairing so much.
How can the story continue? Well here are some ideas.
1. Does Ed have his real limps or his automail. I'm assuming he has one or the other if he can walk around, carry Sasuke, and cook. That means he can use Alchemy. So maybe he could teach Sasuke? Here's a link all about Alchemy from FMA:: wiki/Alchemy
2. Al could find a way to get to the Naruto universe and Sasuke could get jealous at his arrival?
3. This is more of a little fun thing but I think Ed should meet Anko so she can taunt and tease him about his height. Haha.
4. When Orochimaru comes maybe Sasuke does go with him and Ed joins up with Naruto and the other people who went after Sasuke to help catch him.
5. TenTen could come into the story but accidently injuring Ed and having to take him to the hospital or something. Like she's training with her millions of weapons and one goes stray and hits Ed. That's all I can think of at the moment.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Go on :-) nice fic
JAY QUEEN chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
please update I want to know what happens next
Karasu97 chapter 2 . 7/9/2013
Well, I'd say since Ed's older than the konoha eleven by eight years, I would suggest EdxAnko, or EdxShizune. No, I don't think there are nor should be any golden eyed shinobi besides Orochimaru, or Ed. Unless, of course you want Al to pop up in the story at some point. I don't necessarily see how Ino is relevant, as she's a Sasuke fan girl right now, unless you want to do sasuino. Ed should have chakra, or else he'll be at a disadvantage. Plus Truth already stuffed all that info in his head, why have it be useless? Root shouldn't really show up except for maybe monitoring Ed, as it seems to be very inactive during this time. I don't know how to put in tenten though, sorry.
Pokeshadow55 chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
OH. MY. GOD. Give me an update and I will love you forever. This is so good, and pretty much the only of it's kind as far as I've seen.
Trying -Helps chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
The chapters are short by I'd encourage you to keep writing. The plot is interesting, I'd spend time getting a Beta though or at least do some light editing, some of the statements seem to awkward. Good story
Guest chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
kukukuku-I mean seriously Anali? wheres everything we tlked abou? And cooking! WTF?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
kk, anali, this is really off. and u asked my help 4 a CONTEST! FU BIATCH
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