|Reviews for Be still|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
So good plz write more
| supersmashkingdomhearts9902 chapter 2 . 1/2/2013
This story is amazing! I can not wait to see what else you have in store, and I'm really worried for Ava - she deserves to live! But you know what the sad thing is? None of his victims live! Oh Gosh - you need to update soon, please? I need to know what happens!? You're a wonderful writer by the way, this story is not only exciting but it's gripping. You're doing a marvelous job, keep up the great work :-)
| Dessi16 chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
Oh mai gawd! Love it! I command you to update this story right now! *points at screen* I want to read more!
| charchi8987 chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
it's really brilliant!
| JaimeApenimo chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
I loved this chapter, I think the theme you have going for you is exceptional. I would like to see you describe what happens she is unconscious. Like how in the book they have the "perfect" world, maybe you could do a sort a vague dream thing. I don't know, personally I really enjoyed the story.
| betsybugaboo chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
please continue this story! it is very good